for Sometimes, When It's Raining8/20/2007 c1 
32Serason
It just so happens to be raining as I read this. I don't hear any frightful cries, or anything, but maybe I could. One day. It was very pretty and I learned a new word.
32SerasonIt just so happens to be raining as I read this. I don't hear any frightful cries, or anything, but maybe I could. One day. It was very pretty and I learned a new word.
1/6/2007 c1 25Bitter Irony
Very interesting and beautiful poem: the format is excellent. I love that it rhymes, but doesn't hit you over the head with the fact. The story takes some thinking (in a good way): nice use of metaphor.
I'm going to go check out more of your poetry now. :-)
~Bitter Irony
25Bitter IronyVery interesting and beautiful poem: the format is excellent. I love that it rhymes, but doesn't hit you over the head with the fact. The story takes some thinking (in a good way): nice use of metaphor.
I'm going to go check out more of your poetry now. :-)
~Bitter Irony