for Amongst Them, Laughing8/20/2007 c1 
32Serason
I found the "I almost laugh" line distracting from the regular stanza but once I got to the end it all made sense. Great job.
32SerasonI found the "I almost laugh" line distracting from the regular stanza but once I got to the end it all made sense. Great job.
4/20/2007 c1 73ten pts above average
I didnt really understand this but the first stanza was brilliant and the last line really tops it off...good job!
73ten pts above averageI didnt really understand this but the first stanza was brilliant and the last line really tops it off...good job!