for Fly Higher6/9/2009 c1 dibsxonxcinderella
Aw that is so touching! You wrote that in 7th grade? Wow! Nice job! Its a nice poem. :)
Aw that is so touching! You wrote that in 7th grade? Wow! Nice job! Its a nice poem. :)
12/27/2008 c1 
10Sabreal
*stares gobsmacked at the screen*
you wrote this in SEVENTH GRADE?
Sweet baby Jesus.
10Sabreal*stares gobsmacked at the screen*
you wrote this in SEVENTH GRADE?
Sweet baby Jesus.
1/22/2008 c1 2every when
Ah. This poem is good, but the only thing is that it's so cliche. A lot of poems are like this. However, the rhymes and flow is far better than over half of all the others put together.
2every whenAh. This poem is good, but the only thing is that it's so cliche. A lot of poems are like this. However, the rhymes and flow is far better than over half of all the others put together.
11/21/2007 c1 Corrupted Lungs
Wow, I finally read this and I have to say that I think this is really amazing. Good job for writing this when you were so young! :)
Wow, I finally read this and I have to say that I think this is really amazing. Good job for writing this when you were so young! :)
11/20/2007 c1 2Cute-But-Psyco
OMI GOD YOUR POEM IS AWESOME YOU ROCK AW YEA I HAVE I POEM THAT I NEED REVIEWS ON AND YOURS WOULD BE REALLY IMPORTANT CAUSE YOUR SO TALENTED SO GO TO MY PROFILE AND CLICK ON THE ONE THAT SAYS 'UNTILTED' THANX YOUR AWESOME! TOOTLES
2Cute-But-PsycoOMI GOD YOUR POEM IS AWESOME YOU ROCK AW YEA I HAVE I POEM THAT I NEED REVIEWS ON AND YOURS WOULD BE REALLY IMPORTANT CAUSE YOUR SO TALENTED SO GO TO MY PROFILE AND CLICK ON THE ONE THAT SAYS 'UNTILTED' THANX YOUR AWESOME! TOOTLES
4/22/2007 c1 6Shadowed and Shattered
I love this poem. I still have it taped to our bathroom mirror. :D
6Shadowed and ShatteredI love this poem. I still have it taped to our bathroom mirror. :D
3/18/2007 c1 12sunflowersing
Thats such a cute poem. Pretty, actually. Keep up the great writing!
sunflowersing
12sunflowersingThats such a cute poem. Pretty, actually. Keep up the great writing!
sunflowersing
3/9/2007 c1 danielle renee
dude! lookie what i did! i'm reviewing he he he this is going to be great fun... I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS POEM... oh and don't you dare forget izzy's toes are as red as a rose... ya you know the rest.. luv ya bud!
dude! lookie what i did! i'm reviewing he he he this is going to be great fun... I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS POEM... oh and don't you dare forget izzy's toes are as red as a rose... ya you know the rest.. luv ya bud!
2/11/2007 c1 4chris saign
i like this poem because of the rhythmn and the way you don't feel it necassary to kill the artistic value by rhymning the end words
4chris saigni like this poem because of the rhythmn and the way you don't feel it necassary to kill the artistic value by rhymning the end words