for Color Coated Dreams1/17/2007 c1 
177notated descant
well written... i find this extremely metaphorical, and realistic. I love poems that make you feel like you're someone you've never been =)
177notated descantwell written... i find this extremely metaphorical, and realistic. I love poems that make you feel like you're someone you've never been =)
1/6/2007 c1 1thestonedfox
I adore that last stanza- especially because the term "candy man" can sounds so ironic and twisted. And I liked the abrupt stops in lines, you put them in all the right places. Oh the irony in her referring to the alternative lifestyle as "the high". Nice work.
1thestonedfoxI adore that last stanza- especially because the term "candy man" can sounds so ironic and twisted. And I liked the abrupt stops in lines, you put them in all the right places. Oh the irony in her referring to the alternative lifestyle as "the high". Nice work.