for To Die For8/29/2007 c3 
4theflounce
I must beg you to please continue this...PLEASE!
this is super fantastically good!
like, really good...and I want to know what happens!
4theflounceI must beg you to please continue this...PLEASE!
this is super fantastically good!
like, really good...and I want to know what happens!
3/22/2007 c3 3I Quoth Nevermore
This sounds great. It kind of reminds me of Twilight, but it's still original. I hope you update ASAP!
3I Quoth NevermoreThis sounds great. It kind of reminds me of Twilight, but it's still original. I hope you update ASAP!
2/28/2007 c3 2Angel of Ink
haha. That's awesome. I think I would probably KILL HIM if he did that to me, though. =D
2Angel of Inkhaha. That's awesome. I think I would probably KILL HIM if he did that to me, though. =D
2/9/2007 c3 5becuna
ne, this storeh was friggin' awesome XD luved it, luved it, luved it! 0_o...now...i am waiting for thy update! ^_^
5becunane, this storeh was friggin' awesome XD luved it, luved it, luved it! 0_o...now...i am waiting for thy update! ^_^
1/16/2007 c3 2Skitties
xD Omg.
Nicholas (Nick) is hilarious.
And who's the goth? :O And what ridiculous outfit was she wearing? (There are so many, it's hard to pinpoint a goth one.)
Lol. But I must say, I love the way this story meshes.
Keep on groovin'. :3
- Dreaming. i.n Negative
2SkittiesxD Omg.
Nicholas (Nick) is hilarious.
And who's the goth? :O And what ridiculous outfit was she wearing? (There are so many, it's hard to pinpoint a goth one.)
Lol. But I must say, I love the way this story meshes.
Keep on groovin'. :3
- Dreaming. i.n Negative
1/16/2007 c3 1xLoveAddictx
lucky people i have school at 8. anyway great chapter this one was kinda funny! anyway update soon!
1xLoveAddictxlucky people i have school at 8. anyway great chapter this one was kinda funny! anyway update soon!
1/16/2007 c3 Faith
AH! I love it! I love the last line...You need to update again! PLEASE! At least write more so I can read.
AH! I love it! I love the last line...You need to update again! PLEASE! At least write more so I can read.
1/16/2007 c3 StarDust1880
kind of creppy that he would sneak into her room. god, even i think my eyes kind of buldge out for a while.
kind of creppy that he would sneak into her room. god, even i think my eyes kind of buldge out for a while.
1/16/2007 c3 5Sure as the Dawn
Ha ha. This chapter was good. I liked the last part. I can't wait to read the next one so I can see what happens. Is she gonna slap him? Give him the cold shoulder? Yell at him? Please please please please update soon. :)
5Sure as the DawnHa ha. This chapter was good. I liked the last part. I can't wait to read the next one so I can see what happens. Is she gonna slap him? Give him the cold shoulder? Yell at him? Please please please please update soon. :)
1/16/2007 c3 1phoenixchic
let me guess, the gothic girl was Nick's "food"? Hmm, your story is really interesting, and I would like to read more...soonish :)
1phoenixchiclet me guess, the gothic girl was Nick's "food"? Hmm, your story is really interesting, and I would like to read more...soonish :)
1/16/2007 c3 4ethidda
Yay, I knew he'd come back. Did he kill the goth girl? I hope he doesn't kill Emily... or at least revive her if he does.
Can't wait till you write more.
4ethiddaYay, I knew he'd come back. Did he kill the goth girl? I hope he doesn't kill Emily... or at least revive her if he does.
Can't wait till you write more.
1/12/2007 c2 Ellesmere
I like it. The character seems pretty believable. Good work with this.
I like it. The character seems pretty believable. Good work with this.