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12/18/2008 c1 1DanceLikeNo-oneIsWatching
A love the phrase "A dream written and painted on destiny’s palm." It has such great imagery. I like how you can convey so much sadness/longing in this poem. Beware the word everlasting. Look at random love poems/grief love poems, and I bet half of them have the word everlasting. It is a gorgeous word, but horribly abused. Overall, I think your poem was great! Keep writing!

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