
5/31/2010 c1 Samawati shwari
Its great! U should finish it. I lyk Tonyas character, and if Bradley isnt a weepy fag like most of the slash stars in fp, i like him too. Off to a great start, seriously.
Its great! U should finish it. I lyk Tonyas character, and if Bradley isnt a weepy fag like most of the slash stars in fp, i like him too. Off to a great start, seriously.
2/17/2007 c2
7The Egg
Where did all the Good go? Suddenly everything became written in one-liner format and I got confused as to who was talking and who was not.
Mesha? What? What? Can I read a story today with someone who doesn't have a freaky name? This chapter turned me off, seriously. Especially after reading that first chapter.
5/10

Where did all the Good go? Suddenly everything became written in one-liner format and I got confused as to who was talking and who was not.
Mesha? What? What? Can I read a story today with someone who doesn't have a freaky name? This chapter turned me off, seriously. Especially after reading that first chapter.
5/10
2/17/2007 c1 The Egg
Yuck, who honestly likes Harry Potter now? The first book was good, but then they got all shit-ish.
"...But wearing girl skirts feels good, I don’t know, feels kind of kinky-ish.”"
Ha, I'm quoting that one.
There is something wrong with this, though. Sometimes it's hard to know who's talking and who's not. And, some paragraphs would have been nice, at the end I mean.
But otherwise...very funny and cool!
8.5/10
Yuck, who honestly likes Harry Potter now? The first book was good, but then they got all shit-ish.
"...But wearing girl skirts feels good, I don’t know, feels kind of kinky-ish.”"
Ha, I'm quoting that one.
There is something wrong with this, though. Sometimes it's hard to know who's talking and who's not. And, some paragraphs would have been nice, at the end I mean.
But otherwise...very funny and cool!
8.5/10