for Big Bad Wolf8/7/2010 c14 Hettiezstar
Guh. I'm sure we all know Sophia's :P
I really enjoy your story! One thing though: Werewolf/werewolves not wearwolf/wearwolves! :P
I see you haven't updated in a while, but hopefully you will real soon (:
I really love how you describe 'the pull' Lana feels- hopefully we'll see even more of Lucan's reactions to it soon...heh ;)
Damn, I kinda liked Oliver XD I like that he listens though, 'cause barely anyone there seems to spare even a second for Lana. She's just been ~taken and doesn't even ~know what's going on. So not fair.
I wonder what is going to happen next! Hopefully Lana will find her ~place in the pack more, and Lucan will be more...~present.
Oh, I think if you had a more detailed summary you would draw in even more people; something with the words 'werewolf', 'vampire', 'mate', 'kidnap', 'war' would be preferable as then it would come up in the search results for the correct audience looking for a specific type of fic (: This kind of fic has a large audience~ so don't abandon this story! It brings us joy :P
Anyways,
Update real soon!
MOARNAO
plzkthnxbai
♥ ∞ ♦ ♥
Guh. I'm sure we all know Sophia's :P
I really enjoy your story! One thing though: Werewolf/werewolves not wearwolf/wearwolves! :P
I see you haven't updated in a while, but hopefully you will real soon (:
I really love how you describe 'the pull' Lana feels- hopefully we'll see even more of Lucan's reactions to it soon...heh ;)
Damn, I kinda liked Oliver XD I like that he listens though, 'cause barely anyone there seems to spare even a second for Lana. She's just been ~taken and doesn't even ~know what's going on. So not fair.
I wonder what is going to happen next! Hopefully Lana will find her ~place in the pack more, and Lucan will be more...~present.
Oh, I think if you had a more detailed summary you would draw in even more people; something with the words 'werewolf', 'vampire', 'mate', 'kidnap', 'war' would be preferable as then it would come up in the search results for the correct audience looking for a specific type of fic (: This kind of fic has a large audience~ so don't abandon this story! It brings us joy :P
Anyways,
Update real soon!
MOARNAO
plzkthnxbai
♥ ∞ ♦ ♥
7/11/2010 c3 yea
so shes been kidnapped and been told that her father is dead and is acting like that ...i hate you, your writing, and your characters. i hope you die.
so shes been kidnapped and been told that her father is dead and is acting like that ...i hate you, your writing, and your characters. i hope you die.
7/11/2010 c2 yea
your dialouge is horrible
your dialouge is horrible
7/11/2010 c1 yea
i think your character is an idiot, with idiot thoughts.
i think your character is an idiot, with idiot thoughts.
5/16/2010 c14 theirdre
why does she have to be dizzy. she does have a good heart. i think Tiffany should be Ethan mate. time for another update.
why does she have to be dizzy. she does have a good heart. i think Tiffany should be Ethan mate. time for another update.
4/18/2010 c13 ClassicStatic
Wow. I love this story so far. I'm abit confused as to why Jayce abducted Lana and then simply...gave?..her back to Lucan.
But other than that I adore this. I can't wait for more!
Wow. I love this story so far. I'm abit confused as to why Jayce abducted Lana and then simply...gave?..her back to Lucan.
But other than that I adore this. I can't wait for more!
3/13/2010 c14 
5charliej
Hey - I stumbled on your story - it's cute, funny, she's so ditzy! Hope you keep updating
5charliejHey - I stumbled on your story - it's cute, funny, she's so ditzy! Hope you keep updating
2/22/2010 c14 18Aoide's Anthem
Hooray! More! I'm glad that Lana has a friend now, and that it's not causing issues for her. Write more!
18Aoide's AnthemHooray! More! I'm glad that Lana has a friend now, and that it's not causing issues for her. Write more!
2/20/2010 c14 ChristianAngel01
lol hat was an interestin chapter almost forgo about tis story anywaz at least she has a fiend now lol and I love t disney movie part! updat soon
lol hat was an interestin chapter almost forgo about tis story anywaz at least she has a fiend now lol and I love t disney movie part! updat soon
2/19/2010 c14 1Stuck.In.Wonderland239
Ah! I love this story!
I wish I had a guy like Lucan! So jealous!
Update soon pretty please... with a cherry on top!
Haha thanks. =D I think Tiff should get with Aiden... just a though since they are both so flirty.
1Stuck.In.Wonderland239Ah! I love this story!
I wish I had a guy like Lucan! So jealous!
Update soon pretty please... with a cherry on top!
Haha thanks. =D I think Tiff should get with Aiden... just a though since they are both so flirty.
2/19/2010 c14 chicagobabe
Sophia sounds nice, but i hope she is not evil! was glad u updated i like this story :) cannot wait for the next chapter
Sophia sounds nice, but i hope she is not evil! was glad u updated i like this story :) cannot wait for the next chapter