3/20/2010 c1 2stuckinreality92
ok i dont comment often in fact this is only my 2nd time in a couple of years. one i forced my mind to forget they were brother and sister it was an amazing story and concept. i like the anamalistic theme. if yo8u have any recommendations of others like this let me know
ok i dont comment often in fact this is only my 2nd time in a couple of years. one i forced my mind to forget they were brother and sister it was an amazing story and concept. i like the anamalistic theme. if yo8u have any recommendations of others like this let me know
12/14/2008 c1 4Kimera77
I really like this story. Nice twist in the plot, simple, but crude and fullfiling. I would love to see how you'd develop a story based upon a similar plot. Keep it up!
I really like this story. Nice twist in the plot, simple, but crude and fullfiling. I would love to see how you'd develop a story based upon a similar plot. Keep it up!
4/19/2008 c1 3Estelin
this story was great. keep up the good work and writing. i can't wait to read more of your work.
this story was great. keep up the good work and writing. i can't wait to read more of your work.