for The Carillon8/20/2007 c1 
32Serason
Wow. This was fantastic, to me to showed how time goes on no matter what happens. I was also blown away at how many words I didn't know, but still understood thanks to context clues. I felt stupid, and inspired at the same time.
32SerasonWow. This was fantastic, to me to showed how time goes on no matter what happens. I was also blown away at how many words I didn't know, but still understood thanks to context clues. I felt stupid, and inspired at the same time.
5/1/2007 c1 194yodel a blue streak
This is written very well, and I love the repetition. I can't think of any suggestion that would improve it.
194yodel a blue streakThis is written very well, and I love the repetition. I can't think of any suggestion that would improve it.