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2/2/2008 c1 2Cross Rose
I really liked this one, it was a bit depressing, but it hit's a spot. You know?

Hey, could you please check out some of my poems?

Thank you.
1/8/2007 c1 16animegirl777
No-One is perfect. No-One seem not to exist(thus the name) the poem's rhythm is comfortable, a hard thing to accomplish. good job
1/8/2007 c1 123454321
I like it all except the 4th line "you yelp and yelp". That one felt like a stretch to me.

-J.A.

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