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3/9/2007 c1 5RedHairedWriter
I like this. and I think I can relate, and don't know why, it's a general feeling about the poem. and it does make sense in the fact that it doesn't feel like it should, because of the confusion. Does that make sense?
1/11/2007 c1 1T0uchMeN0t
You are concentrating too much on rhyming so you can't exactly feel the emotions you are trying to potray in this poem but nice try

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