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4/26/2007 c1 hacker33
nice story, too bad its so short, i was just getting into it.

Where did u get the idea for the title.

theres a song called Another Day In Paradise.

but ohh well.

Hacker33

(Dont be offended by da name)
4/5/2007 c1 14FreakierThanThou
Aww. That's so sad. I liked the observations on what people were thinking, your protagonist is really perceptive. S/he seems to know people very well, and to be very wise.

The formatting is a little odd. Did you mean to have it centered or is that a 'technical difficulty'?

I like your style, it's very... flowy, is the best word I can think of to describe it.

Keep writing,

-Freaky
1/11/2007 c1 71MidnightStar005
I really like this one!

Best Wishes

Added it to my C2!
1/11/2007 c1 94smile persephone
This is an exquisite piece of writing. Your writing style and diction flow wonderfully together. The imagery is a potent force in this poem. Nicely written.

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