6/27/2023 c21 DoTleon
I love it !, every part of it ! , the Balance, B&T, The civilisation,...everything to the end !
Tris and Tray, their development, and the back story with Godron was simply amazing to.
The prey and predator thought and viewpoint get fast under your skin and make everything more interesting or feel right.
I took my time to read it (a week) English is not my first language, and oooh boy i wish i made it last longer, But i will no doubt return to reading it again soon.
A BIG Truly Thank You and Love for the Autor, you've made one more happy soul :)
I love it !, every part of it ! , the Balance, B&T, The civilisation,...everything to the end !
Tris and Tray, their development, and the back story with Godron was simply amazing to.
The prey and predator thought and viewpoint get fast under your skin and make everything more interesting or feel right.
I took my time to read it (a week) English is not my first language, and oooh boy i wish i made it last longer, But i will no doubt return to reading it again soon.
A BIG Truly Thank You and Love for the Autor, you've made one more happy soul :)
6/7/2021 c21 WickedCityy
Hello! I don't usually write reviews/comments, but I've been trying to get better at that, so here goes I guess:
I don't really know what I expected when I started reading this fic. Honestly, I think I read the "slash/shota/furry" warning at the start of the summary, thought "huh, this might be weird" and started it for... shits and giggles, I suppose?
Either way, I'm glad I did! It's obvious that you put a lot of care into the worldbuilding of this story and evolving the story and characters beyond just the central pair. I'm not crazy about stories where the romance between two characters is the biggest available plot, so I enjoyed the myriad subplots you wove in here. It was also nice seeing another interpretation of how a society of furries might work. As a furry myself, I and many furry creators tend to gloss over deeper societal implications in favor of whatever story we're trying to worldbuild, so stories that focus on those aspects are rarer and tend to feel more fresh and unique.
All in all, thanks for writing this! It was a very fun read.
Hello! I don't usually write reviews/comments, but I've been trying to get better at that, so here goes I guess:
I don't really know what I expected when I started reading this fic. Honestly, I think I read the "slash/shota/furry" warning at the start of the summary, thought "huh, this might be weird" and started it for... shits and giggles, I suppose?
Either way, I'm glad I did! It's obvious that you put a lot of care into the worldbuilding of this story and evolving the story and characters beyond just the central pair. I'm not crazy about stories where the romance between two characters is the biggest available plot, so I enjoyed the myriad subplots you wove in here. It was also nice seeing another interpretation of how a society of furries might work. As a furry myself, I and many furry creators tend to gloss over deeper societal implications in favor of whatever story we're trying to worldbuild, so stories that focus on those aspects are rarer and tend to feel more fresh and unique.
All in all, thanks for writing this! It was a very fun read.
5/6/2019 c16 okami.takishima
I like how you had pee-head's (never gonna let that go XD) thoughts mirror Tristan's at the start of the fic! :)
Oh and bringing back "cute as a bug's ear" from what, their third interaction? Absolute genius.
I like how you had pee-head's (never gonna let that go XD) thoughts mirror Tristan's at the start of the fic! :)
Oh and bringing back "cute as a bug's ear" from what, their third interaction? Absolute genius.
5/3/2019 c9 okami.takishima
I found it interesting that Gordon called Tay a "boy-wolf" instead of a "wolf-boy" at the end of this chapter. Is there a special reason for that, like maybe another sign that he's starting to respect him more or something, or is it just a typo?
I found it interesting that Gordon called Tay a "boy-wolf" instead of a "wolf-boy" at the end of this chapter. Is there a special reason for that, like maybe another sign that he's starting to respect him more or something, or is it just a typo?
5/1/2019 c6 okami.takishima
You said "aside" twice, in regard to Tristan's sword anxiety. Great fic aside from a few typos tho!
You said "aside" twice, in regard to Tristan's sword anxiety. Great fic aside from a few typos tho!
4/6/2018 c1 Sol
Hey,
So...I am writing this at 4am where I am at, so please don't judge me on grammar and such, heh. I think the last time I wrote a review on here I was in middle school, or maybe freshman year of highschool. It's been a long time...it's been a interesting life. But this story, its changed my thinking. It changed my likes and dislikes. It changed quite a few things and actually made me continue in art and my education when I thought that I could not stand it any longer. It was a bright point in a otherwise darker time. And being able to look back on that is a little crazy. Anyway, the writing may not be the best that I have read, at least grammar wise and prose. But it's the feeling the spine tingling emotion that runs through you making you want to continue, the pacing, the descriptions, the plot and characters, how well they grow and become fleshed out in such a short amount of time. The ending, few and far between at there such tear jerking beautiful endings as this unless published. Your story encaptured me when I was younger and still does now. I want with all my heart to make a comic or at least draw the book, maybe commission someone to do so. This story feels the need to be told and I only wish I could help spread it. If someone already has and I could never find it I would love to know, but with your permission and perhaps guidance I would like to start on this or at least try and get it commissioned. I love this story, and I hope you will allow me to work with it as well as you. Thank you for writing, I hope this message finds you in good health.
Sincerely,
Sol
Ps- my email is this, sorry I don't have an account. Hope to hear from you soon.
Hey,
So...I am writing this at 4am where I am at, so please don't judge me on grammar and such, heh. I think the last time I wrote a review on here I was in middle school, or maybe freshman year of highschool. It's been a long time...it's been a interesting life. But this story, its changed my thinking. It changed my likes and dislikes. It changed quite a few things and actually made me continue in art and my education when I thought that I could not stand it any longer. It was a bright point in a otherwise darker time. And being able to look back on that is a little crazy. Anyway, the writing may not be the best that I have read, at least grammar wise and prose. But it's the feeling the spine tingling emotion that runs through you making you want to continue, the pacing, the descriptions, the plot and characters, how well they grow and become fleshed out in such a short amount of time. The ending, few and far between at there such tear jerking beautiful endings as this unless published. Your story encaptured me when I was younger and still does now. I want with all my heart to make a comic or at least draw the book, maybe commission someone to do so. This story feels the need to be told and I only wish I could help spread it. If someone already has and I could never find it I would love to know, but with your permission and perhaps guidance I would like to start on this or at least try and get it commissioned. I love this story, and I hope you will allow me to work with it as well as you. Thank you for writing, I hope this message finds you in good health.
Sincerely,
Sol
Ps- my email is this, sorry I don't have an account. Hope to hear from you soon.
4/22/2017 c10 Jewbaca
Wolves are still like 40 times stronger than a rabbit
Wolves are still like 40 times stronger than a rabbit
4/22/2017 c3 Jewbaca
WHY Does THIS SHIT HAVE TO BE GAY! :(
WHY Does THIS SHIT HAVE TO BE GAY! :(
7/22/2015 c21 1Insanity Fuels My Imagination
This is a work of imaginative genius. There's really not much else to say. I love the world, storyline, characters, and writing style. The internet (and physical world) needs more stories as creative and lovely as this one.
This is a work of imaginative genius. There's really not much else to say. I love the world, storyline, characters, and writing style. The internet (and physical world) needs more stories as creative and lovely as this one.
3/22/2014 c1 angela marie
talk about princesess stories hahaha
talk about princesess stories hahaha
7/19/2013 c21 1freak-joy-spastic
Magnificent, wonderful, a great read indeed! I absolutely couldn't put it down. It started off so simple but evolved into seething much more. I wish finding more stories like this wasn't so hard.
Magnificent, wonderful, a great read indeed! I absolutely couldn't put it down. It started off so simple but evolved into seething much more. I wish finding more stories like this wasn't so hard.
11/2/2012 c9 DrYuriMom
Better n' better. I must admit I do love how the plot is developing. It's so natural and things slowly escalate. The relationship between Tris and Tay is so sweet now. I don't often care about characters like I do them. I'm still having a blast with this. I'm at odds eager for more and dreading it being over.
Better n' better. I must admit I do love how the plot is developing. It's so natural and things slowly escalate. The relationship between Tris and Tay is so sweet now. I don't often care about characters like I do them. I'm still having a blast with this. I'm at odds eager for more and dreading it being over.
10/31/2012 c5 DrYuriMom
Okay, of COURSE the next chapter clearly answered the question I had. I think I'll just shut up and read now. I'm noting the dialog isn't as well developed as your earlier 'Girl for Me'. Still, the creative story more than makes up for it. I'm already caring for the two boys. We'll see about these others.
Okay, of COURSE the next chapter clearly answered the question I had. I think I'll just shut up and read now. I'm noting the dialog isn't as well developed as your earlier 'Girl for Me'. Still, the creative story more than makes up for it. I'm already caring for the two boys. We'll see about these others.