for The Wolf and the Lamb1/11/2008 c21 Phantasmagorical
Thank you, thank you, thank you for finishing this fantastic story of yours. I must say, out of all the stories I've read, yours is definitely one of the most creative and original. As well as very cute and sweet.. and happy; but also sad... Alright, so it's just EMOTIONAL all around.
I'm sure I've said a lot of the good things about your story in my past reviews. So instead I'll just remark on the ending itself. Thank you, thank you, thank you for not making the ending vague/open/unanswered. I absolutely HATE those types of endings for THESE types of stories. With stories like this, I don't WANT you to leave the ending open so the reader can choose how he wants it to end; because for me, that just doesn't make it feel complete. This is YOUR story and you should end it how you want it to; and I'll be perfectly satisfied with that.
I must say, considering everything that happened, the ending was a very happy one. Unlike some people (COUGHCOUGHJ.K.ROWLINGCOUGHCOUGH), you didn't just kill off a bunch of likable characters for the sake of people dying. However, even just the person you really focused on dying had a big impact, in my opinion. So... Alls well it ends well! I'm honestly sad that it's over; it's not often something so... good.. comes around. You have my salutations as one of the best authors in my opinion.
P.S. I hope your life is going better since the last time I talked with you. Thank you again for writing such a wonderful story to it's end!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for finishing this fantastic story of yours. I must say, out of all the stories I've read, yours is definitely one of the most creative and original. As well as very cute and sweet.. and happy; but also sad... Alright, so it's just EMOTIONAL all around.
I'm sure I've said a lot of the good things about your story in my past reviews. So instead I'll just remark on the ending itself. Thank you, thank you, thank you for not making the ending vague/open/unanswered. I absolutely HATE those types of endings for THESE types of stories. With stories like this, I don't WANT you to leave the ending open so the reader can choose how he wants it to end; because for me, that just doesn't make it feel complete. This is YOUR story and you should end it how you want it to; and I'll be perfectly satisfied with that.
I must say, considering everything that happened, the ending was a very happy one. Unlike some people (COUGHCOUGHJ.K.ROWLINGCOUGHCOUGH), you didn't just kill off a bunch of likable characters for the sake of people dying. However, even just the person you really focused on dying had a big impact, in my opinion. So... Alls well it ends well! I'm honestly sad that it's over; it's not often something so... good.. comes around. You have my salutations as one of the best authors in my opinion.
P.S. I hope your life is going better since the last time I talked with you. Thank you again for writing such a wonderful story to it's end!
1/6/2008 c1 
8FreeFallHeadFirstOffARoof
This story is weird but cute in so many ways, and what better way to show differences and how u can still get along, than a prey and predator!
:D
8FreeFallHeadFirstOffARoofThis story is weird but cute in so many ways, and what better way to show differences and how u can still get along, than a prey and predator!
:D
12/14/2007 c21 Jackie
omg that is a great ending! its soo cute lol ^-^
omg that is a great ending! its soo cute lol ^-^
12/6/2007 c21 sunshineandrobots
Wow. This was so very awsome on SO many levels. *_* Tristan and Taylor make for the cutest, sweetest couple ever. And I love how you kept the whole we-shouldn't-deny-our-differences-but-should-get-along-anyway theme running throughout.
The story did feel a little too drawn out to me. And what with my tendency to get attached to pairings, reading about Taylor's sleeping around with other people after his break-up with Tristan irked me to no end. x_x But that's just a personal pet peeve, and other than that: beautiful story with a great premise and wonderful characters. [loves]
Wow. This was so very awsome on SO many levels. *_* Tristan and Taylor make for the cutest, sweetest couple ever. And I love how you kept the whole we-shouldn't-deny-our-differences-but-should-get-along-anyway theme running throughout.
The story did feel a little too drawn out to me. And what with my tendency to get attached to pairings, reading about Taylor's sleeping around with other people after his break-up with Tristan irked me to no end. x_x But that's just a personal pet peeve, and other than that: beautiful story with a great premise and wonderful characters. [loves]
11/29/2007 c21 True.Randomness
This became my favorite stories of them all. It had so many themes and it was so well writen I could have asked for a better one. This story was wonderful and beautiful like no other. I think I will go a re=read it aging, though I never do that for this story I will. I can't wait to see your next work!
This became my favorite stories of them all. It had so many themes and it was so well writen I could have asked for a better one. This story was wonderful and beautiful like no other. I think I will go a re=read it aging, though I never do that for this story I will. I can't wait to see your next work!
11/27/2007 c20 Marissa La Faye Isolde
I thought this paragraph-and especially these sentences:
"Ben had only moments to say whatever he was going to say before Dick would never hear his voice again. It was time to say important things. '...I love you.'"
was profound, and pretty much said it all in its' raw and bare simplistic truth, as all things are spoken from the heart.
I thought this paragraph-and especially these sentences:
"Ben had only moments to say whatever he was going to say before Dick would never hear his voice again. It was time to say important things. '...I love you.'"
was profound, and pretty much said it all in its' raw and bare simplistic truth, as all things are spoken from the heart.
11/26/2007 c21 HumanInfiltrator
I think I love you.
You have such a wonderful talent. Thank You.
I think I love you.
You have such a wonderful talent. Thank You.
11/18/2007 c20 HumanInfiltrator
Finally! Yeay!
OK. Very sad. Very reveiling. Thank You.
Finally! Yeay!
OK. Very sad. Very reveiling. Thank You.
6/25/2007 c19 Phantasmagorical
Yay! I'm so glad you're finally writing again. It was totally worth the wait, this is really exciting stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Yay! I'm so glad you're finally writing again. It was totally worth the wait, this is really exciting stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter!
6/17/2007 c19 Jackie
sry that life hasn't been going to great for you, u have my sympathies (don't know if i spelled that right) and as always AWESOME writing ^-^
-jackie-
sry that life hasn't been going to great for you, u have my sympathies (don't know if i spelled that right) and as always AWESOME writing ^-^
-jackie-
6/17/2007 c19 The Angel of Writing
God damn, you're good. As much as I wasn't impressed with the Tristan and Taylor breaking up and getting back together I liked how things came together like this after years within the story. There's so much history between the characters and revivals of different movements and different races working together. I love it. Simply reading this over I can feel the tension build and I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter. The fairy tale Tristan and Taylor were working on sounds wonderful and the way it led into this fight, this settling of the many scores was fluid and wonderful. I hope to read more soon. Thank you for the excellent read.
~*~The Angel of Writing~*~
God damn, you're good. As much as I wasn't impressed with the Tristan and Taylor breaking up and getting back together I liked how things came together like this after years within the story. There's so much history between the characters and revivals of different movements and different races working together. I love it. Simply reading this over I can feel the tension build and I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter. The fairy tale Tristan and Taylor were working on sounds wonderful and the way it led into this fight, this settling of the many scores was fluid and wonderful. I hope to read more soon. Thank you for the excellent read.
~*~The Angel of Writing~*~