for The Wolf and the Lamb6/16/2007 c15 The Angel of Writing
I must first say that this is a well flowing and completely engrossing story. I just read fifteen chapters in a period of close to five hours. I couldn't pull myself away after Taylor and Triston had met Roma and somehow it felt natural for Gordon to fall for a female predator. I like your writing style and I hope to finish the rest of your story tomorrow since I'm currently writing this review at 1:35 in the AM. I just wanted to say good job and I like the premise of your story. Nice development and mixing of human and animal traits to make the characters. Well, good night! Keep writing, I hope to find updates if the story is not yet completed.
~*~The Angel of Writing~*~
I must first say that this is a well flowing and completely engrossing story. I just read fifteen chapters in a period of close to five hours. I couldn't pull myself away after Taylor and Triston had met Roma and somehow it felt natural for Gordon to fall for a female predator. I like your writing style and I hope to finish the rest of your story tomorrow since I'm currently writing this review at 1:35 in the AM. I just wanted to say good job and I like the premise of your story. Nice development and mixing of human and animal traits to make the characters. Well, good night! Keep writing, I hope to find updates if the story is not yet completed.
~*~The Angel of Writing~*~
5/27/2007 c1 anon
yiff in hell, furfag
yiff in hell, furfag
5/13/2007 c17 Phantasmagorical
Hey there, just a curious inquiry about the next chapter. It's been awhile, so I was wondering what was up with ya? Everything okay and such? Or are you just spending a lot of time on this chapter?
Just curious, thought I'd ask.
Hey there, just a curious inquiry about the next chapter. It's been awhile, so I was wondering what was up with ya? Everything okay and such? Or are you just spending a lot of time on this chapter?
Just curious, thought I'd ask.
4/21/2007 c18 Jaclyn
E!
*jumps-spinning in circles* AWESOME lol ^-^
E!
*jumps-spinning in circles* AWESOME lol ^-^
4/18/2007 c18 Phantasmagorical
I'm running out of things to say about this story. I'll just leave it at amazing. I can't wait for this battle. It sounds like it's gonna be a real close shave as to who's gonna win.
Keep up the good work!
-Ray Bowman.
I'm running out of things to say about this story. I'll just leave it at amazing. I can't wait for this battle. It sounds like it's gonna be a real close shave as to who's gonna win.
Keep up the good work!
-Ray Bowman.
4/14/2007 c17 Jaclyn
awesome ^-^
awesome ^-^
4/10/2007 c17 
19diebyownhands
I miss some of the cuteness. Still a wonderful story, though it seems that the Gordon and Teesah (sp) took the spotlight for a bit. Their story is also very good but I'm very attached to the wolf and Lamp (sheep, ram what is he now?).
19diebyownhandsI miss some of the cuteness. Still a wonderful story, though it seems that the Gordon and Teesah (sp) took the spotlight for a bit. Their story is also very good but I'm very attached to the wolf and Lamp (sheep, ram what is he now?).
4/10/2007 c17 Phantasmagorical
I really, really like where this story is going. You've opened up so many possibilities with just this one chapter. So many adventurous opportunities just begging to happen. I really like these Desert Hares. They bring some serious variety to the story. Not that it was lacking variety in the first place, though...
Things are gonna get dangerous it sounds like, though. What with T&T heading back to Town. The Akkelahn inventing the crossbow, then sharing it with the Desert Hares. I'm wondering if they'll go to war against the coyotes to take back their homeland. But that seems like an entire another story. What with the enormous size of the coyotes population I'm sure it wouldn't be an easy bout. I'm just rambling though.
"It was like a story-book – where the author left out the less appetizing parts - the ugly parts, and the boring details of every-day life - and only told the good stuff."
That made me chuckle. You're just such a good story teller. It makes me a little envious. Good work, all the way.
I really, really like where this story is going. You've opened up so many possibilities with just this one chapter. So many adventurous opportunities just begging to happen. I really like these Desert Hares. They bring some serious variety to the story. Not that it was lacking variety in the first place, though...
Things are gonna get dangerous it sounds like, though. What with T&T heading back to Town. The Akkelahn inventing the crossbow, then sharing it with the Desert Hares. I'm wondering if they'll go to war against the coyotes to take back their homeland. But that seems like an entire another story. What with the enormous size of the coyotes population I'm sure it wouldn't be an easy bout. I'm just rambling though.
"It was like a story-book – where the author left out the less appetizing parts - the ugly parts, and the boring details of every-day life - and only told the good stuff."
That made me chuckle. You're just such a good story teller. It makes me a little envious. Good work, all the way.
4/10/2007 c17 hesfb
"Instead of falling, they found wings to fly"
omg, can you say squee?
i think the idea of an educational picture book was actually a really amazing one (well; i sure as hell didnt think of it :P) as it ties both of their professions and interests together so well into something that will, hopefully, 'do good'. i should stop gushing; i do realise drawing their talents together was probably your intention- it just struck me as a really clever way to do it.
i also loved this:
“We Spirit-Talkers actually speak with the dead! You don't believe in Spirits?”
“Uhm... we're getting on tricky ground here, Lee. Have you spoken with the dead?”
“No – I am only an apprentice...”
“Ah. Well, when you do, be sure and tell me about it, okay? Maybe you can make a believer out of me.”
HAHAHAHA. awesome. nice bit of religious commentary and all. i really like how -even though its fantasy- their world seems real through the parallels that can be drawn to this one. that probably sounds silly but im kinda used to reading fantasy that starts normal and then spirals into complete wtf territory. im sure you know what i mean.
i need to stop reviewing this story. :P i swear ive never given so many for one story! (in fact i normally never bother to review, bad reader that i am)
anyway; longest review ever :S but as ever; i love your story *strokes ego*
xh
"Instead of falling, they found wings to fly"
omg, can you say squee?
i think the idea of an educational picture book was actually a really amazing one (well; i sure as hell didnt think of it :P) as it ties both of their professions and interests together so well into something that will, hopefully, 'do good'. i should stop gushing; i do realise drawing their talents together was probably your intention- it just struck me as a really clever way to do it.
i also loved this:
“We Spirit-Talkers actually speak with the dead! You don't believe in Spirits?”
“Uhm... we're getting on tricky ground here, Lee. Have you spoken with the dead?”
“No – I am only an apprentice...”
“Ah. Well, when you do, be sure and tell me about it, okay? Maybe you can make a believer out of me.”
HAHAHAHA. awesome. nice bit of religious commentary and all. i really like how -even though its fantasy- their world seems real through the parallels that can be drawn to this one. that probably sounds silly but im kinda used to reading fantasy that starts normal and then spirals into complete wtf territory. im sure you know what i mean.
i need to stop reviewing this story. :P i swear ive never given so many for one story! (in fact i normally never bother to review, bad reader that i am)
anyway; longest review ever :S but as ever; i love your story *strokes ego*
xh
4/7/2007 c4 hesfb
OMG
OMG
OMG
*hyperventilates*
SQE!
I thank you for such smutty goodness. I dont really mind that its not a smutty story; as it is so GOOD- its just that your smuts so perfectly hawt. :P
haha I love that line- "Oh my g- Taylor? How the hell am I supposed to get THAT down?"
LOVELOVELOVE
(sqes silently)
xxh
OMG
OMG
OMG
*hyperventilates*
SQE!
I thank you for such smutty goodness. I dont really mind that its not a smutty story; as it is so GOOD- its just that your smuts so perfectly hawt. :P
haha I love that line- "Oh my g- Taylor? How the hell am I supposed to get THAT down?"
LOVELOVELOVE
(sqes silently)
xxh
4/6/2007 c16 hesfb
aw. I love the endnote. though I did nearly cry when they broke up (I thought; what a horrid author, how could you be so cruel as to make the poor sheepie have sex with multiple people :P) BUT after finishing the chapter I realised, as im sure you are meant to, that the breakup was necessary for them -and in particular Taylor- to mature and whatnot.
longest sentance ever that.
excellent chapture though. so many tension hooks. :P
I do hope there is another couple of chapters yes? Am I right in that this is nearing the end?
I could be wrong.
which would make me perfectly happy. anyway; GOOD JOB. and you know what next chapter needs; make up smut (im such a smut-whore) I apologise.
aw. I love the endnote. though I did nearly cry when they broke up (I thought; what a horrid author, how could you be so cruel as to make the poor sheepie have sex with multiple people :P) BUT after finishing the chapter I realised, as im sure you are meant to, that the breakup was necessary for them -and in particular Taylor- to mature and whatnot.
longest sentance ever that.
excellent chapture though. so many tension hooks. :P
I do hope there is another couple of chapters yes? Am I right in that this is nearing the end?
I could be wrong.
which would make me perfectly happy. anyway; GOOD JOB. and you know what next chapter needs; make up smut (im such a smut-whore) I apologise.
4/6/2007 c16 Phantasmagorical
Aw, it's sad to see Taylor growing up and Tristan and him growning apart...
Good thing they got back together in the same chapter! Phew!
I'll just wait to see where this story heads.
Will you add some information on where Roma came from, perhaps? I'm a little curious on whether you've thought about that sort of thing.
Aw, it's sad to see Taylor growing up and Tristan and him growning apart...
Good thing they got back together in the same chapter! Phew!
I'll just wait to see where this story heads.
Will you add some information on where Roma came from, perhaps? I'm a little curious on whether you've thought about that sort of thing.
4/1/2007 c15 Jaclyn
aw, ehehehehe i love this story ^-^
aw, ehehehehe i love this story ^-^
3/31/2007 c15 hesfb
aw... what a lurrvely bit of ending squishyness :P
"everybody found squirrels sexy. It was all that fluffy tail that did it."
haha.
its strange (ive obviously never thought about squirrels as being sexy) but it really really works. so well in fact that im tempted to draw a picture of amy and her luxurious tale :P
so congrats on another plotpacked smutlite(c) chapter!
xxh
aw... what a lurrvely bit of ending squishyness :P
"everybody found squirrels sexy. It was all that fluffy tail that did it."
haha.
its strange (ive obviously never thought about squirrels as being sexy) but it really really works. so well in fact that im tempted to draw a picture of amy and her luxurious tale :P
so congrats on another plotpacked smutlite(c) chapter!
xxh
3/31/2007 c15 Phantasmagorical
Okay so, chapter 15, is really great. It's really quitei nteresting, but I have to comment on two things. (1) You named the squirrel Amy, which is so typical. =P
And (2) "Silly rabbit - tricks are for kids." LMAO!
You're my favorite writer now. No doubt about it...
But I have to ask, this isn't the end is it? Please tell me this isn't the end! I love reading this story. I don't want it to end. *Huff* I always get so sad when a good story ends.
Okay so, chapter 15, is really great. It's really quitei nteresting, but I have to comment on two things. (1) You named the squirrel Amy, which is so typical. =P
And (2) "Silly rabbit - tricks are for kids." LMAO!
You're my favorite writer now. No doubt about it...
But I have to ask, this isn't the end is it? Please tell me this isn't the end! I love reading this story. I don't want it to end. *Huff* I always get so sad when a good story ends.