for The Wolf and the Lamb3/31/2007 c15 diebyownhands
aw bunny man's plans have changed.
This story has surely evolved from the first chp. It's pretty sweet watching the characters change and grow.
aw bunny man's plans have changed.
This story has surely evolved from the first chp. It's pretty sweet watching the characters change and grow.
3/29/2007 c1 
16AppLEaves
Meh. Did something happen to chapter 14? Cause this is the second time you've updated it. (Or so my computer says.)(Stupid piece of shitty crap, why can't you let me read it!)
Bummer, I was so looking forward to the next chapter. (Liek, omg, update update update!)I mean, it's not everyday you get to read furry slash and not go, uh... my god... am I supposed to get off of this?
Hell, I was practically peeping through my fingers when I first read this. (For what reason, I really do not know.) But hey, now, I very nearly check your profile out every single day for an update. So if you get more hits than reviews, you can blame it on people like me. (Yep lazy people like me.)
(Ohmygod, Madame Goat died. I can't believe it.)
(Aw... Gordy's not gonna get any any time soon. Poor thing...)
(Oh yeah Tristy, you rock, hon. You totally rock my socks. XD Who wouldn't want a furry piece of muscle to save you from crashing rocks of snow?)
-Apple
16AppLEavesMeh. Did something happen to chapter 14? Cause this is the second time you've updated it. (Or so my computer says.)(Stupid piece of shitty crap, why can't you let me read it!)
Bummer, I was so looking forward to the next chapter. (Liek, omg, update update update!)I mean, it's not everyday you get to read furry slash and not go, uh... my god... am I supposed to get off of this?
Hell, I was practically peeping through my fingers when I first read this. (For what reason, I really do not know.) But hey, now, I very nearly check your profile out every single day for an update. So if you get more hits than reviews, you can blame it on people like me. (Yep lazy people like me.)
(Ohmygod, Madame Goat died. I can't believe it.)
(Aw... Gordy's not gonna get any any time soon. Poor thing...)
(Oh yeah Tristy, you rock, hon. You totally rock my socks. XD Who wouldn't want a furry piece of muscle to save you from crashing rocks of snow?)
-Apple
3/28/2007 c1 2Silfarion
It kinda reminds me of the movie arashi no yoru ni that was also pretty slashy. It's prolly just the general idea seeing as those two in your story def. arent friends.
2SilfarionIt kinda reminds me of the movie arashi no yoru ni that was also pretty slashy. It's prolly just the general idea seeing as those two in your story def. arent friends.
3/27/2007 c13 Phantasmagorical
Teesah's leaving? No! I hope she comes back. It'd be a waste if she didn't and you know it. I must say that it's fun seeing Gordon and Teesah interact together. Why is it not knowing each other's language makes everything so much funner? Go figure.
Always fun to read your story. I'm waiting for chapter 14 to show up, so I can read it as fast as possible, so I know what happens next.
A big thanks for not keeping up this story without fault. You must not have much trouble with writer's block considering how quickly you put these chapters out.
I should stop using the word avidly, but it's the way I read your stories.
Avidly yours,
J.R.B.
Teesah's leaving? No! I hope she comes back. It'd be a waste if she didn't and you know it. I must say that it's fun seeing Gordon and Teesah interact together. Why is it not knowing each other's language makes everything so much funner? Go figure.
Always fun to read your story. I'm waiting for chapter 14 to show up, so I can read it as fast as possible, so I know what happens next.
A big thanks for not keeping up this story without fault. You must not have much trouble with writer's block considering how quickly you put these chapters out.
I should stop using the word avidly, but it's the way I read your stories.
Avidly yours,
J.R.B.
3/26/2007 c1 hesfb
Cant claim the spying, its just that i read the summary (shock i know) ;P
And i'll add though i loved 'the girl for me' (truly a great fic) i think im beginning to like this even more; epic slash fantasy? how can anyone refuse (i dont understand it either!)
Im really glad you would have continued writing anyway though, it's slightly annoying when authors are like '20 reviews for the next chapter blah blah', because -although its the authors right- it doesnt (i think) create good vibes for the readers (i usually drop such fics :P fickle me)
But yes, v. glad you're continuing to write and i just wanted to let you know that i at least love this fic in its entirety.
xxh
Cant claim the spying, its just that i read the summary (shock i know) ;P
And i'll add though i loved 'the girl for me' (truly a great fic) i think im beginning to like this even more; epic slash fantasy? how can anyone refuse (i dont understand it either!)
Im really glad you would have continued writing anyway though, it's slightly annoying when authors are like '20 reviews for the next chapter blah blah', because -although its the authors right- it doesnt (i think) create good vibes for the readers (i usually drop such fics :P fickle me)
But yes, v. glad you're continuing to write and i just wanted to let you know that i at least love this fic in its entirety.
xxh
3/26/2007 c14 hesfb
GOSH. i just LOVE this story. and i feel compelled to tell you again as you seem to be under the impression that no one reads it...
well, i read it and i think its wonderfull (slightly more perfect if it had more smut but i do understand why thats not the case and im not really complaining :P)
this story is fabulous and if it squicks people; sucks to them (and the early days Bunny man) they're missing out on something great!
GOSH. i just LOVE this story. and i feel compelled to tell you again as you seem to be under the impression that no one reads it...
well, i read it and i think its wonderfull (slightly more perfect if it had more smut but i do understand why thats not the case and im not really complaining :P)
this story is fabulous and if it squicks people; sucks to them (and the early days Bunny man) they're missing out on something great!
3/26/2007 c14 1HumanInfiltrator
Old guard? I get the sinking feeling that things have changed in "Civilisation" propably for the worst? Ah but it was swet how tris stood up for Tay.
Another lovely chappie, thank you.
1HumanInfiltratorOld guard? I get the sinking feeling that things have changed in "Civilisation" propably for the worst? Ah but it was swet how tris stood up for Tay.
Another lovely chappie, thank you.
3/26/2007 c14 TheGodMachine
Cute story, Teesah kind of reminds me of Sacagawea! Taylor just sounds adorable; and he and Tristin are one of the cutest couples on this site. I think it'd be pretty cool to some illustrations of what they look, because the whole time I'm reading about animal/people i have no idea what to imagine.
Cute story, Teesah kind of reminds me of Sacagawea! Taylor just sounds adorable; and he and Tristin are one of the cutest couples on this site. I think it'd be pretty cool to some illustrations of what they look, because the whole time I'm reading about animal/people i have no idea what to imagine.
3/26/2007 c14 19diebyownhands
I still love this story but there were parts that got a bit dull, maybe I'm just used to this story being fast paced.
Like always Tris and Tay are so cute and sweet that I might not eat any sugar today lol.
19diebyownhandsI still love this story but there were parts that got a bit dull, maybe I'm just used to this story being fast paced.
Like always Tris and Tay are so cute and sweet that I might not eat any sugar today lol.
3/22/2007 c13 diebyownhands
"I wonder if she purrs... Gods, Spirits, and Nature – if she does, I'll just curl up and die. Happy"
So sweet it made me laugh, but then :( poor bunny.
"I wonder if she purrs... Gods, Spirits, and Nature – if she does, I'll just curl up and die. Happy"
So sweet it made me laugh, but then :( poor bunny.
3/22/2007 c12 Phantasmagorical
Good show man, good show. I would have never expected Gordon to, well... do *that*. It almost made me feel embarrassed just to read it, haha. I like this Teesah woman very much. I'm sure you'll use her to great potential.
As usual your style of writing paints a wonderful picture. To the degree that when I think back on your story, I see pictures and not words. The fight scene was excellent, very clear.
The Lady dying is a shame. Especially the way in which she died. I assume she died from dehydration? A sad way to go in my opinion.
Thank you again for answering my past questions. I'll be anticipating the next chapter.
Good show man, good show. I would have never expected Gordon to, well... do *that*. It almost made me feel embarrassed just to read it, haha. I like this Teesah woman very much. I'm sure you'll use her to great potential.
As usual your style of writing paints a wonderful picture. To the degree that when I think back on your story, I see pictures and not words. The fight scene was excellent, very clear.
The Lady dying is a shame. Especially the way in which she died. I assume she died from dehydration? A sad way to go in my opinion.
Thank you again for answering my past questions. I'll be anticipating the next chapter.
3/19/2007 c12 1HumanInfiltrator
Sniff-sniff. Well...
But a cougar woman for Gordan, oh you are just too naughty!
1HumanInfiltratorSniff-sniff. Well...
But a cougar woman for Gordan, oh you are just too naughty!
3/19/2007 c12 19diebyownhands
kay, I've got a wet face.Yes two tears rolled out my eyes, so sad, so sweet, so sad.
though not much emphasis was put on the Lady's death I could imagine how horrible it must have been for Tay. I'm not saying that the lac of emphasis on her death was bad, you left us hanging wondering what would happen wanting to read faster and faster.
The Bunny thing was good too, hehe he found himself a cat. I know tristan will enjoy picking on him over this. So the journey seems to be coming to an end.
19diebyownhandskay, I've got a wet face.Yes two tears rolled out my eyes, so sad, so sweet, so sad.
though not much emphasis was put on the Lady's death I could imagine how horrible it must have been for Tay. I'm not saying that the lac of emphasis on her death was bad, you left us hanging wondering what would happen wanting to read faster and faster.
The Bunny thing was good too, hehe he found himself a cat. I know tristan will enjoy picking on him over this. So the journey seems to be coming to an end.
3/18/2007 c6 Midnights Scream
I like the whole game idea...every cool I think it'd be cool to see Tristan kill something with his teeth just to prove them wrong, but this is good too.
I like the whole game idea...every cool I think it'd be cool to see Tristan kill something with his teeth just to prove them wrong, but this is good too.
3/18/2007 c5 Midnights Scream
It's kinda amusing and yet growing on me...I think the reason you had so many people for your other story is because this one is hard to picture the people and they're so much like animals...I'm still trying to picture the people, but I don't know if they look like animals, but can talk and walk or look like people with pointy ears and a tail. So there's just my one problem. Otherwise it's pretty good.
It's kinda amusing and yet growing on me...I think the reason you had so many people for your other story is because this one is hard to picture the people and they're so much like animals...I'm still trying to picture the people, but I don't know if they look like animals, but can talk and walk or look like people with pointy ears and a tail. So there's just my one problem. Otherwise it's pretty good.