for What Pictures Never Show3/19/2007 c1 
15Loud Silence
This is a really good poem. It's got great rhythm and I can feel what you're saying in the poem. I like it.
15Loud SilenceThis is a really good poem. It's got great rhythm and I can feel what you're saying in the poem. I like it.
1/24/2007 c1 20The Wandering Musician
Wow, this is great. The third stanza was a little rough; it had more syllables per line than the other stanza, and that made it not fit in as well with the others.
I love the final lines "And I bet you didn't notice/ because the pictures never show." The whole poem is very touching, but those lines really bring it all together and make it great.
20The Wandering MusicianWow, this is great. The third stanza was a little rough; it had more syllables per line than the other stanza, and that made it not fit in as well with the others.
I love the final lines "And I bet you didn't notice/ because the pictures never show." The whole poem is very touching, but those lines really bring it all together and make it great.
1/18/2007 c1 136GirlxAnachronism
amazing! I loved how the poem was in this telling you kind of tone but the bold letters were the anger, and frustration. At least thats how i saw it. I loved it
136GirlxAnachronismamazing! I loved how the poem was in this telling you kind of tone but the bold letters were the anger, and frustration. At least thats how i saw it. I loved it
1/14/2007 c1 123dress her up in fairytales
man, is it just me or are people getting better at their writing? this is the fourth piece that i've read that blew me away. it's rather short but i don't care at the moment. i can relate beautifully to this. and maybe this is why i hate taking pictures.
123dress her up in fairytalesman, is it just me or are people getting better at their writing? this is the fourth piece that i've read that blew me away. it's rather short but i don't care at the moment. i can relate beautifully to this. and maybe this is why i hate taking pictures.