for When Pigs FLy8/2/2007 c1 Tytherpol
i guess this is a cool poem.
it at least has a really nice rhythm behind it.
maybe i just don't really like the transition with "despite"
it's still a pretty good poem.
respects, -ty.
i guess this is a cool poem.
it at least has a really nice rhythm behind it.
maybe i just don't really like the transition with "despite"
it's still a pretty good poem.
respects, -ty.
6/4/2007 c1 emmytasticgal
WOWZA! this is incredible...totally enjoyable to read. I love how you maintain such an awesome rhythm and the thing about Harper's face LOL. so right. Gorgeous images... simply gorgeous. keep up the awesomeness...
WOWZA! this is incredible...totally enjoyable to read. I love how you maintain such an awesome rhythm and the thing about Harper's face LOL. so right. Gorgeous images... simply gorgeous. keep up the awesomeness...
1/17/2007 c1 
16cassidy00
I remember when you first wrote this. You sent it to me for an opinion. It's still as good as I first thought it was.
16cassidy00I remember when you first wrote this. You sent it to me for an opinion. It's still as good as I first thought it was.
1/11/2007 c1 40Moosher
Nice build up, it flows well and its thought provoking, but the ending was a bit dissappointing.. I wasn't expecting it .. it wasn't personal..it was sort of vague and general.. But you've got a major talent. Keep up the good work.
-Moosher
40MoosherNice build up, it flows well and its thought provoking, but the ending was a bit dissappointing.. I wasn't expecting it .. it wasn't personal..it was sort of vague and general.. But you've got a major talent. Keep up the good work.
-Moosher
1/11/2007 c1 163sharks don't sleep
This is really good. The examples you give get your point across powerfully in the end. Good job!
Falcon
163sharks don't sleepThis is really good. The examples you give get your point across powerfully in the end. Good job!
Falcon