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1/13/2007 c1 52la luna cara
Thanks for the review, and the compliment! I'm not sure how much I like my experimentation with punctuation either, but that's why it's experimentation, eh? :D

Anyway, I really like this poem. My favorite part is "ice-laden fire falling in silver flakes / sparkling in the light of the waning moon". Great imagery! I love watching snow fall, and you really conjured up a picture. Good job!

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