1/10/2009 c1 10close enough to speak
Very interesting start. Adrian isn't obnoxious and Alex is a complete asshole, so a great pair! Can't wait to read more.
Very interesting start. Adrian isn't obnoxious and Alex is a complete asshole, so a great pair! Can't wait to read more.
1/4/2009 c26 RuBiAx
hey! i really liked this story! it was interesting from the begining until the end! keep úp the good work!
take care
hey! i really liked this story! it was interesting from the begining until the end! keep úp the good work!
take care
1/4/2009 c5 shinedropdime
So, this is the third time I'm reading Redux. Your writing is awesome; your characters are more than 3d- they're infinitely dimensional. You make cliches beautiful :)
ps. I read Reason and Romance first, and Redux is the better of the two, I think :)
pps. alex! sexy vengeful god!
So, this is the third time I'm reading Redux. Your writing is awesome; your characters are more than 3d- they're infinitely dimensional. You make cliches beautiful :)
ps. I read Reason and Romance first, and Redux is the better of the two, I think :)
pps. alex! sexy vengeful god!
1/3/2009 c26 5heartshockey
So, I read Reason and Romance Redux, and as soon as I was done, I ran to Reason and Romance to just compare them. And honestly, I have no idea which one I like more. Maybe Redux because I read it first, but I'm not sure.
I loved the plot for the story. The story itself was amazing. I loved Alex's character! I didn't really like Caitlin in Reason and Romance. But I did like India. I loved how in Redux, it took place where Alex lived. I don't know, but I liked him better in Redux, I think. I also like how his friends were in it more.
As for Adrian, I liked her a lot. I l iked how she was unsure of things, but she still went for Alex, and those such things. Which also reminds me, I loved how you used Alex's eyes to show what he was feeling. I can't wait to read more of your work. Happy New Year.
So, I read Reason and Romance Redux, and as soon as I was done, I ran to Reason and Romance to just compare them. And honestly, I have no idea which one I like more. Maybe Redux because I read it first, but I'm not sure.
I loved the plot for the story. The story itself was amazing. I loved Alex's character! I didn't really like Caitlin in Reason and Romance. But I did like India. I loved how in Redux, it took place where Alex lived. I don't know, but I liked him better in Redux, I think. I also like how his friends were in it more.
As for Adrian, I liked her a lot. I l iked how she was unsure of things, but she still went for Alex, and those such things. Which also reminds me, I loved how you used Alex's eyes to show what he was feeling. I can't wait to read more of your work. Happy New Year.
1/2/2009 c26 4SRC-SI
i love this story:)
ur writing is awesome...and i love ur characters...they crack me up! Quentin is probably my fav right now...
i really like ur writing style, that coupled with ur amazing characters and plot made this story a very entertaining and worthwhile read.
anyways good job and keep writing!
i love this story:)
ur writing is awesome...and i love ur characters...they crack me up! Quentin is probably my fav right now...
i really like ur writing style, that coupled with ur amazing characters and plot made this story a very entertaining and worthwhile read.
anyways good job and keep writing!
12/29/2008 c19 Anonymous
I absolutely love Quentin in this revision. You wrote him as a sex-deprived idiot, but at the same time really quite devoted to his friends. The way he was concerned about Adrian made him look like he truly treated her as a friend, and not always living his life for fun.
Anyway, I've read the original version of R, and it was fantastic. The tension was breath-takingly well-written, because somehow it took my breath away. I like the way you write your characters. Not a pushover, uh-uh, but yet the right timing to respond and such.
I really, really do hope that you'll write more stories in the future. And they would be just as interesting as all the others.
I absolutely love Quentin in this revision. You wrote him as a sex-deprived idiot, but at the same time really quite devoted to his friends. The way he was concerned about Adrian made him look like he truly treated her as a friend, and not always living his life for fun.
Anyway, I've read the original version of R, and it was fantastic. The tension was breath-takingly well-written, because somehow it took my breath away. I like the way you write your characters. Not a pushover, uh-uh, but yet the right timing to respond and such.
I really, really do hope that you'll write more stories in the future. And they would be just as interesting as all the others.
12/28/2008 c1 mhm
Dude, I love Alex's dad!
Dude, I love Alex's dad!
12/26/2008 c26 5Not Mary Jane
I hadn't read this after Reason and Romance coz I think this story can't get any better, since Reason and Romance is already better than better, in my opinion.
And I'm TOTALLY WRONG. I've finished this in 2 days, and ohmigawd, I just can't stop reading. I love the milkshake part and this Owen kid, the "Lord Xiron Darkstar Fury commands you all to be quiet" makes me cracked up this late of night. The relationship between Adrian and Alex is much more... intimate, sweet, and there's much more drama.
Anyway, I should stop rambling. I think I'll probably drown myself in the sequel tomorrow despite my projects which deal after the break. What should I say, your stories got me HOOKED. haha.
I hadn't read this after Reason and Romance coz I think this story can't get any better, since Reason and Romance is already better than better, in my opinion.
And I'm TOTALLY WRONG. I've finished this in 2 days, and ohmigawd, I just can't stop reading. I love the milkshake part and this Owen kid, the "Lord Xiron Darkstar Fury commands you all to be quiet" makes me cracked up this late of night. The relationship between Adrian and Alex is much more... intimate, sweet, and there's much more drama.
Anyway, I should stop rambling. I think I'll probably drown myself in the sequel tomorrow despite my projects which deal after the break. What should I say, your stories got me HOOKED. haha.
12/26/2008 c26 AmoreJess
haha. this was hilarious. one of the best ive ever read...though a bit jacked up but i liked how it concluded :] 10/10!
-AmoreJes
haha. this was hilarious. one of the best ive ever read...though a bit jacked up but i liked how it concluded :] 10/10!
-AmoreJes
12/25/2008 c11 1Fiasco Can Fly
Travis is AMAZING.
I LOVE HIM.
He's just so random and caring, while on drugs.
My favorite line so far:
"and we'll kill that f*ck*r with a chainsaw. It'll be another Texas Chainsaw Massacre"
Bahhahah, you're a great writer!
Travis is AMAZING.
I LOVE HIM.
He's just so random and caring, while on drugs.
My favorite line so far:
"and we'll kill that f*ck*r with a chainsaw. It'll be another Texas Chainsaw Massacre"
Bahhahah, you're a great writer!
12/24/2008 c10 7ayenelle
I completely love all of your stories & this just happened to be the first one I have read ever(:
When I reread this story (for the billionth time practically) I noticed this line:
" Alex's father cut his ex-wife short. "You're mad at me? Fine. You want to scream at me; I don't care." He glanced at his son still at the table. "Whatever you do, leave Alex out of it. Take your pound of flesh from me." "
And so, quick question, have you read The Merchant of Venice by William Shakespeare? Because you know, the whole pound of flesh thing ... ? :D
I completely love all of your stories & this just happened to be the first one I have read ever(:
When I reread this story (for the billionth time practically) I noticed this line:
" Alex's father cut his ex-wife short. "You're mad at me? Fine. You want to scream at me; I don't care." He glanced at his son still at the table. "Whatever you do, leave Alex out of it. Take your pound of flesh from me." "
And so, quick question, have you read The Merchant of Venice by William Shakespeare? Because you know, the whole pound of flesh thing ... ? :D
12/24/2008 c22 leesuh
LOL Ch22 is so funny :)
This is the best story I have read! you made me laugh out loud plenty of time :) Thank you so much for sharing your story :)
LOL Ch22 is so funny :)
This is the best story I have read! you made me laugh out loud plenty of time :) Thank you so much for sharing your story :)
12/23/2008 c26 4devil's-fav-angel
I was just rereading this story and I was casting the characters. I realized that Megan Fox would make an interesting Adrian. Just a random thought...
I was just rereading this story and I was casting the characters. I realized that Megan Fox would make an interesting Adrian. Just a random thought...