for Reason and Romance Redux1/13/2007 c1 Warbling Wallaby
A revision! To be honest, just by the first chapter, I think I like the older version better. It's harder to dislike Jason and root for Alex when Jason hasn't cheated on Adrian first... unless you plan to incorporate it into your story later. :) But revisions are good. I'll be eagerly awaiting for more!
A revision! To be honest, just by the first chapter, I think I like the older version better. It's harder to dislike Jason and root for Alex when Jason hasn't cheated on Adrian first... unless you plan to incorporate it into your story later. :) But revisions are good. I'll be eagerly awaiting for more!
1/13/2007 c1 mode
well.. this is new haha it's cool and it shall be interesting because it is completeley changed well.. i hope it's as good as the original.
cheers
well.. this is new haha it's cool and it shall be interesting because it is completeley changed well.. i hope it's as good as the original.
cheers
1/13/2007 c1 
11Luv and Peace
hey! pretty cool way to write the story again. I just thought it was a bit rushed. In the older version, she was a lot more cooler like she was sizing Alex up or something. Over here, she just attacked and is a lot more blunt. Anyway, maybe thats part of the story. Can't wait for the next update!
11Luv and Peacehey! pretty cool way to write the story again. I just thought it was a bit rushed. In the older version, she was a lot more cooler like she was sizing Alex up or something. Over here, she just attacked and is a lot more blunt. Anyway, maybe thats part of the story. Can't wait for the next update!
1/13/2007 c1 Ice and Snow
really wonderful x] no wonder it seemed...familiar. ooh. totally different view =] awesome.
really wonderful x] no wonder it seemed...familiar. ooh. totally different view =] awesome.
1/13/2007 c1 3SilverAlexis
you're killing me, but i think i might live if you update regularly, or is that too much to hope for? will this story have georgia in it? cause she was awesome.
3SilverAlexisyou're killing me, but i think i might live if you update regularly, or is that too much to hope for? will this story have georgia in it? cause she was awesome.
1/13/2007 c1 Justice
You know you're good when you keep people from doing their homework.
seriously, HAVE YOU NO SHAME?
contributing to the downfall of my education.
... tsk tsk tsk.
You know you're good when you keep people from doing their homework.
seriously, HAVE YOU NO SHAME?
contributing to the downfall of my education.
... tsk tsk tsk.
1/13/2007 c1 18L. Scarlet
I read the first version and never reviewed but I just have to know... Is Jason the same jerk he was in the last story? and why is she still with him? Alex seems different too but that could just be my impression.
18L. ScarletI read the first version and never reviewed but I just have to know... Is Jason the same jerk he was in the last story? and why is she still with him? Alex seems different too but that could just be my impression.
1/13/2007 c1 11Sphynx
Wow. You're rewriting my favorite story. In a way, I'm glad because it will be interesting to see what all you come up with, but at the same time, a little scared. From the first chapter, it's very easy to see that the plot is going to be totally different, considering Adrian is moving Arizona instead of Alex coming to Chicago.
I'm totally interested in seeing where you go with this, however.
11SphynxWow. You're rewriting my favorite story. In a way, I'm glad because it will be interesting to see what all you come up with, but at the same time, a little scared. From the first chapter, it's very easy to see that the plot is going to be totally different, considering Adrian is moving Arizona instead of Alex coming to Chicago.
I'm totally interested in seeing where you go with this, however.
1/13/2007 c1 Peace Rose
I loved the original and this version is looking pretty interesting too. I like the changes you've made; can't wait to see what happens next!
I loved the original and this version is looking pretty interesting too. I like the changes you've made; can't wait to see what happens next!
1/13/2007 c1 3SimplySweetnSour
it was a good idea to revise R&R over again. as much as i like the original one, i must say, this is byfar better
3SimplySweetnSourit was a good idea to revise R&R over again. as much as i like the original one, i must say, this is byfar better
1/13/2007 c1 6mlovektowsing
You will be happy to know that I am very excited for this new version. It sounds like it will be full of interesting changes. I hope to see an update soon!
MK
6mlovektowsingYou will be happy to know that I am very excited for this new version. It sounds like it will be full of interesting changes. I hope to see an update soon!
MK
1/13/2007 c1 Saniaaa
hey, I'm surprised to see you're rewriting this as I didn't think there was anything wrong with the old one but this one looks great as well so far. I hope to read more. Ciao!
hey, I'm surprised to see you're rewriting this as I didn't think there was anything wrong with the old one but this one looks great as well so far. I hope to read more. Ciao!
1/13/2007 c1 bluz
I like it. It's different. At first, when i began reading it, assume that it was going to be like the orginal, but with a few changes here and there. I didn't expect it to change so dramtically. I like it, and can;t wait to read the next installment.
I like it. It's different. At first, when i began reading it, assume that it was going to be like the orginal, but with a few changes here and there. I didn't expect it to change so dramtically. I like it, and can;t wait to read the next installment.