for Reason and Romance Redux1/13/2007 c1 swimchickslam
Whoah this is really different :P But really good too! I hope you continue with it :D
Whoah this is really different :P But really good too! I hope you continue with it :D
1/13/2007 c1 
2K.B. Hanna
I do believe we have a winner with this revision. Adrian has a bit of spunk that seemed to be missing from the previous version. It'd be interesting if she was a bit of a hellion, but I don't think that's quite in her personality.
It's nice to know she doesn't like Karen all that much in this version. Usually hostility does result in situations such as this.
The change of scenery was refreshing. Adrian's now in Alex's position, only it was summer in the previous version, wasn't it?
Jason's not a filthy scumbag in this one. It's different, but there wouldn't much Adrian could do in Arizona about it, unless she finds out some sleasy escapades in the future. I don't think it would be necessary though.
I'm not sure what else to add seeing as my brain just completely turned off. Anyway, good luck with the new edition. So far, it's proving to be stronger just as you said.
2K.B. HannaI do believe we have a winner with this revision. Adrian has a bit of spunk that seemed to be missing from the previous version. It'd be interesting if she was a bit of a hellion, but I don't think that's quite in her personality.
It's nice to know she doesn't like Karen all that much in this version. Usually hostility does result in situations such as this.
The change of scenery was refreshing. Adrian's now in Alex's position, only it was summer in the previous version, wasn't it?
Jason's not a filthy scumbag in this one. It's different, but there wouldn't much Adrian could do in Arizona about it, unless she finds out some sleasy escapades in the future. I don't think it would be necessary though.
I'm not sure what else to add seeing as my brain just completely turned off. Anyway, good luck with the new edition. So far, it's proving to be stronger just as you said.
1/13/2007 c1 Lena Niccolas
I like it, I love the first one, but this is great too. I think I'll be just as satisfied, as long as the ending is happy ;)
I like it, I love the first one, but this is great too. I think I'll be just as satisfied, as long as the ending is happy ;)
1/13/2007 c1 Blue Devil012
Wow, a complete switch and reserve of situations for the original. :D I like it, wonder whats gonna happen when the girls are living in the Montgomery's house.
Wow, a complete switch and reserve of situations for the original. :D I like it, wonder whats gonna happen when the girls are living in the Montgomery's house.
1/13/2007 c1 JustLikeMe91
This is so exciting!
I loved the old version, and I think it's majordomo cool that you're making a entire new story! I can't wait for more!
This is so exciting!
I loved the old version, and I think it's majordomo cool that you're making a entire new story! I can't wait for more!
1/13/2007 c1 jess
I am thrilled you are doing a re-write on this story! I loved Reason and Romance, but you seem to be taking its development in a different direction. Thanks for sharing the new version!
I am thrilled you are doing a re-write on this story! I loved Reason and Romance, but you seem to be taking its development in a different direction. Thanks for sharing the new version!
1/13/2007 c1 DinaY
i like this one, i think this one is goin to be much better then the other one, not that the other sucks, cuz it doesnt! its really good, except i like this start better.. im rambling arent i? hmm... well i hope u update it soon
i like this one, i think this one is goin to be much better then the other one, not that the other sucks, cuz it doesnt! its really good, except i like this start better.. im rambling arent i? hmm... well i hope u update it soon
1/13/2007 c1 lovely-lips
I think your changes might be a little too significant. It doesn't even sound the same-it almost sounds less..."something". I don't know maybe it's just me, but I thought the first one was great and I DO believe in revisions. I'm revising a story on another sight, but I don't know if that means you should CHANGE the way the whole story went about- but it is YOUR story, so I won’t “dislike” it for NO reason. I just have to say- I hope this one makes you happy. I'll be happy with the first one any time, but I’ll continue to read this one as long as you keep updating it. Almost like {comparing and contrasting}?
I think your changes might be a little too significant. It doesn't even sound the same-it almost sounds less..."something". I don't know maybe it's just me, but I thought the first one was great and I DO believe in revisions. I'm revising a story on another sight, but I don't know if that means you should CHANGE the way the whole story went about- but it is YOUR story, so I won’t “dislike” it for NO reason. I just have to say- I hope this one makes you happy. I'll be happy with the first one any time, but I’ll continue to read this one as long as you keep updating it. Almost like {comparing and contrasting}?
1/13/2007 c1 31emptyword
Interesting, Myrika! I remember you mentioned something about a revision in your bio, but a different setting, different characters? I hadn't expected a total rewrite, I admit. Not that I'm complaining. This looks as promising as the original if not more so. :) So fraught with possibilities... I look forward to following this one too.
31emptywordInteresting, Myrika! I remember you mentioned something about a revision in your bio, but a different setting, different characters? I hadn't expected a total rewrite, I admit. Not that I'm complaining. This looks as promising as the original if not more so. :) So fraught with possibilities... I look forward to following this one too.
1/13/2007 c1 2My Silence
I really like this version so far. I think it's interesting that you've decided to have Adrian's family move to the Montgomery's state instead of the other way around. This should be more interesting. Adrian seems a lot stronger and more equipped with comebacks. I really like that change. I'm excited to see the new version because this is one of my favorite stories on here!
2My SilenceI really like this version so far. I think it's interesting that you've decided to have Adrian's family move to the Montgomery's state instead of the other way around. This should be more interesting. Adrian seems a lot stronger and more equipped with comebacks. I really like that change. I'm excited to see the new version because this is one of my favorite stories on here!
1/13/2007 c1 kazahana
I was really surprised receive the email notification of the 1st chapter. I read it straight away and loved it! I like how you moved the Blakes instead of the Montgomerys and how it's no longer set in summer so we'll get to read about the children's interactions in school. That should be fun!
I was really surprised receive the email notification of the 1st chapter. I read it straight away and loved it! I like how you moved the Blakes instead of the Montgomerys and how it's no longer set in summer so we'll get to read about the children's interactions in school. That should be fun!
1/13/2007 c1 snow blossoms
"I do hope that some of you guys will come to appreciate this new version"? Dude, when can we not appreciate what you write? Seriously, you're a freaking awesome writer. Anyway, back to the chapter, I like the new spin on R&R. Both of them are younger and in high school, which means that sex is going to be a more hellish manner, right? Also, Adrian crying? She has emotions right in the first chapter? Wow, that's a major (but very interesting) change from the first one. Thanks for updating and I can't wait to see the next chappie! G'luck on all your school projects and whatnot!
"I do hope that some of you guys will come to appreciate this new version"? Dude, when can we not appreciate what you write? Seriously, you're a freaking awesome writer. Anyway, back to the chapter, I like the new spin on R&R. Both of them are younger and in high school, which means that sex is going to be a more hellish manner, right? Also, Adrian crying? She has emotions right in the first chapter? Wow, that's a major (but very interesting) change from the first one. Thanks for updating and I can't wait to see the next chappie! G'luck on all your school projects and whatnot!
1/13/2007 c1 sleepiedreamer
im glad your keeping the old one...its nice to read a different one too...and wow i would hate to be in her shoes...not only do you have it up there but also next door! life sucks over there...im surprised she handt made an public outburst yet..lol i would have been and i see the changes in character...i hope you kept most of alex's friends they were pretty cool lol cant wait to read more...update more soon looking forward to it xD
im glad your keeping the old one...its nice to read a different one too...and wow i would hate to be in her shoes...not only do you have it up there but also next door! life sucks over there...im surprised she handt made an public outburst yet..lol i would have been and i see the changes in character...i hope you kept most of alex's friends they were pretty cool lol cant wait to read more...update more soon looking forward to it xD
1/13/2007 c1 hopelessromantic444
OH LOVING IT SO FAR! I LOVED YOUR LAST FIC AND I'M SURE THIS ONE WILL BE JUST AS GOOD IF NOT BETTER =D
OH LOVING IT SO FAR! I LOVED YOUR LAST FIC AND I'M SURE THIS ONE WILL BE JUST AS GOOD IF NOT BETTER =D