3/24/2008 c26 9emilybh
This story was good! I liked it- in case you havent realized I'm working my way through your stories :D
This story was good! I liked it- in case you havent realized I'm working my way through your stories :D
3/23/2008 c26 1SimplyBit
Nice, it's a nice story. I think this is the first time I've said this to a persons face but, your story ended in a nice way so it doesn't need a sequel. All, I want to know is if Alex and Adrian stay together in the end? I'm not going to go into all the things that I want to say... maybe another time becuase 1) It's 2:00 in the fucking mourning and 2) I've got to pee.. So I'm going to save it for another time. But I still like your story.
Nice, it's a nice story. I think this is the first time I've said this to a persons face but, your story ended in a nice way so it doesn't need a sequel. All, I want to know is if Alex and Adrian stay together in the end? I'm not going to go into all the things that I want to say... maybe another time becuase 1) It's 2:00 in the fucking mourning and 2) I've got to pee.. So I'm going to save it for another time. But I still like your story.
3/22/2008 c26 peace love thc
So I just want to say that I loved this story. =D
So I just want to say that I loved this story. =D
3/19/2008 c1 8Lethe's Oblivion
I just started rereading this, but I just felt the need to let you know that I think Meg is hysterical, and if you ever do a sequel about her and Isaac like I think you might have mentioned -or maybe I made that up in my mind because I have a tendency to do that and think it's real- I will be an avid reader.
It made me laugh hysterically when Meg said "This is a fascist podunkville. And I reject your propaganda."
I just started rereading this, but I just felt the need to let you know that I think Meg is hysterical, and if you ever do a sequel about her and Isaac like I think you might have mentioned -or maybe I made that up in my mind because I have a tendency to do that and think it's real- I will be an avid reader.
It made me laugh hysterically when Meg said "This is a fascist podunkville. And I reject your propaganda."
3/19/2008 c1 7thepiemaster
I kind of like the opener on the other one better. Up until the airport part. If your going to do another revision, maybe you could work some of that in. Idk. It's looking good so far :)
-Amy-Kinnz-
I kind of like the opener on the other one better. Up until the airport part. If your going to do another revision, maybe you could work some of that in. Idk. It's looking good so far :)
-Amy-Kinnz-
3/15/2008 c1 1Jeni D
I absolutely loved this story. The only real problem I had with it is that you didn't really describe what your characters looked like. I know that in one of your chapters that you wrote in an a/n what Adrian looked like, but I think you should have wrote it into the story.
Other than that it was a really good story. I'm about o start reading the sequel to it and then possibly the original version just to see what the differences were.
-Jeni
I absolutely loved this story. The only real problem I had with it is that you didn't really describe what your characters looked like. I know that in one of your chapters that you wrote in an a/n what Adrian looked like, but I think you should have wrote it into the story.
Other than that it was a really good story. I'm about o start reading the sequel to it and then possibly the original version just to see what the differences were.
-Jeni
3/10/2008 c1 Emerald123
i like it. :) u should get some of ur stuff published. this is all really great.
i like it. :) u should get some of ur stuff published. this is all really great.
3/9/2008 c24 2Shelbaybayz
Hey, I was wondering, Why don't you have a picture of Jason? I'm so curious to find out what he looks like haha
Hey, I was wondering, Why don't you have a picture of Jason? I'm so curious to find out what he looks like haha
3/2/2008 c26 2Mon Esperance
Oh!Oh! I like Redux better than the original RR, not really sure why though. But anyways, I love your works~ Keep it up~
Oh!Oh! I like Redux better than the original RR, not really sure why though. But anyways, I love your works~ Keep it up~
3/1/2008 c1 Annie
This is utterly AWESOME!
This is utterly AWESOME!
2/27/2008 c26 5HeatherLee
Wow! alright well it took me a while to read this story but i finished it and i absolutely love it! there is really only two things i can criticize you on. one of them being that you put too much information in your author's notes. in the beginning i kept reading them but then you started giving away important things in the plot and i stopped. also when i started reading this i didnt realized it was like an edited version of a previous story or whatever. i just thought this was an original story. i usually like reading the author's notes but your's gave a little too much info. that really didnt have to do with the story though. my only other problem is that you dont describe what the characters look like. for some of them i was able to make up my own mental picture but it was sometimes difficult. i remember in one author's note you mention what Adrian looks like and I know that Alex has green eyes and tan skin but unless i missed it, that is pretty much all i know about what the characters look like. having said that, i really must say this story was incredible. i understood the characters perfectly. it is really hard (in my opinion and from what i've seen) to completly capture who a leading female character is. many writers arent able to do it well but you surpassed that and did it INCREDIBLY! i loved everything about your story and i thought the drama was perfect. before you had Q fall for Adrian i was thinking about sending you a review telling you to write that in but you beat me to it. again, this was incredible and i hope you write more in the future!
Wow! alright well it took me a while to read this story but i finished it and i absolutely love it! there is really only two things i can criticize you on. one of them being that you put too much information in your author's notes. in the beginning i kept reading them but then you started giving away important things in the plot and i stopped. also when i started reading this i didnt realized it was like an edited version of a previous story or whatever. i just thought this was an original story. i usually like reading the author's notes but your's gave a little too much info. that really didnt have to do with the story though. my only other problem is that you dont describe what the characters look like. for some of them i was able to make up my own mental picture but it was sometimes difficult. i remember in one author's note you mention what Adrian looks like and I know that Alex has green eyes and tan skin but unless i missed it, that is pretty much all i know about what the characters look like. having said that, i really must say this story was incredible. i understood the characters perfectly. it is really hard (in my opinion and from what i've seen) to completly capture who a leading female character is. many writers arent able to do it well but you surpassed that and did it INCREDIBLY! i loved everything about your story and i thought the drama was perfect. before you had Q fall for Adrian i was thinking about sending you a review telling you to write that in but you beat me to it. again, this was incredible and i hope you write more in the future!