2/26/2008 c26 8Ocean of Dreams
Sweet. Not many stories can make me wake up early in the morning, sleep through school, run home after it and start reading. Loved the voice and everything! Especially the plot. Definetly can't wait for the sequel (which is good I think isn't centered around the main characters of this one. Also it's good that you chose Quentin, he's very interesting.) Seriously love this one and will continue to read your other stuff :)
Peace, Love,
OOD
Sweet. Not many stories can make me wake up early in the morning, sleep through school, run home after it and start reading. Loved the voice and everything! Especially the plot. Definetly can't wait for the sequel (which is good I think isn't centered around the main characters of this one. Also it's good that you chose Quentin, he's very interesting.) Seriously love this one and will continue to read your other stuff :)
Peace, Love,
OOD
2/24/2008 c26 Elle Winters 9
wow i really really liked this story.. i spent two days reading it while i was meant to b riting an essay and doing an assign.
i havnt read the original one, but i mite jus do that.. aftr my work =.=
wow i really really liked this story.. i spent two days reading it while i was meant to b riting an essay and doing an assign.
i havnt read the original one, but i mite jus do that.. aftr my work =.=
2/24/2008 c26 4b
godDAMN, this is ridic. i spent a good six hours of my life plowing through this ish! i like how you don't over-describe your characters or scenes but get them down pat (i still can't picture what alex and adrian look like though), and the dialogue's pretty sharp. i haven't read the previous story but i kinda like how this one turned out. (does adrian stay with jason in the original?)
my fave character is a tie between travis and quentin. travis is too perfect for words, and i love the idea of a jester with a secretly broken heart.
anyway, thanks for the great ride! (grimace- no, not in THAT sense! argh!)
godDAMN, this is ridic. i spent a good six hours of my life plowing through this ish! i like how you don't over-describe your characters or scenes but get them down pat (i still can't picture what alex and adrian look like though), and the dialogue's pretty sharp. i haven't read the previous story but i kinda like how this one turned out. (does adrian stay with jason in the original?)
my fave character is a tie between travis and quentin. travis is too perfect for words, and i love the idea of a jester with a secretly broken heart.
anyway, thanks for the great ride! (grimace- no, not in THAT sense! argh!)
2/21/2008 c26 Sabaku no Ino
You did a good job cleaning everything up. So, overall, this one is better. Still...for some reason I prefer Alex in the original. I'll try to explain why when I can put my finger on it. I did like Adrian better in Redux, though. Nicky, too. Way more likeable. Heh heh. Just a guess, but is Quentin your favorite guy in the R/R series? I kind of get the feeling he is. Of course I could be wrong. Anyway, wonderful job. I think I'll go on and read some of your other stuff. Keep up the great work!
You did a good job cleaning everything up. So, overall, this one is better. Still...for some reason I prefer Alex in the original. I'll try to explain why when I can put my finger on it. I did like Adrian better in Redux, though. Nicky, too. Way more likeable. Heh heh. Just a guess, but is Quentin your favorite guy in the R/R series? I kind of get the feeling he is. Of course I could be wrong. Anyway, wonderful job. I think I'll go on and read some of your other stuff. Keep up the great work!
2/20/2008 c1 Ivy Lively
I printed out chappies 1-10 and I'm reading it haha bc I cant read it on the computer imma read the rest next time im on like chappie 6 or something very good so far!
I printed out chappies 1-10 and I'm reading it haha bc I cant read it on the computer imma read the rest next time im on like chappie 6 or something very good so far!
2/17/2008 c7 A
Is Nicky the exuberant girl in TSWaQ?
I think it would be cute if she was.
Is Nicky the exuberant girl in TSWaQ?
I think it would be cute if she was.
2/17/2008 c4 a
I love Travis. =)
I love Travis. =)
2/15/2008 c15 reader
hahaha
what a great end to the the chapter
"well, shit"
coming from isaac, too
wow, i'm loving this story
thanks so much for sharing your work
hahaha
what a great end to the the chapter
"well, shit"
coming from isaac, too
wow, i'm loving this story
thanks so much for sharing your work
2/7/2008 c26 FarFromGrace
Finished! I just had to finish it all in one go! It took a while-but im glad I did read it.
The first version was good, but I seem to like this one a little more. Both were well written and filled with that wonderful charm all your characters have but this one-i dont know- just charmed the socks off of me. Alex's friends are so funny and witty as well as Trevor and Vaughn. It seemed to flow so much better than him going to Chicago and the grandparent drama. Like I said I enjoyed both!
Adrian is the female character everyone wishes to be, gorgeous, cold, and incredibly brave to a point of almost cocky. I really admire her character even though she's manipulative and bitchy- aren't we all?
Alex was brilliant as well, defenitly a dream guy. He has way too much charm for his own good. Alex and Adrian's fights had me spitting with laughter-well maybe not spitting.. But yeh =)
Although Karen and Adrian's dad got on my nerves a bit, not because I dislike how you wrote them but because they are so close minded and it frustrated me how easily hypocritical they could be. Especially with all that "im an adult you are a child" crap that parents love to pull.
Quentin was another favorite of course. Trevor as well. God I just loved all of them.
So enough with my rambling! You don't want to hear more compliments im sure =)
xx
Finished! I just had to finish it all in one go! It took a while-but im glad I did read it.
The first version was good, but I seem to like this one a little more. Both were well written and filled with that wonderful charm all your characters have but this one-i dont know- just charmed the socks off of me. Alex's friends are so funny and witty as well as Trevor and Vaughn. It seemed to flow so much better than him going to Chicago and the grandparent drama. Like I said I enjoyed both!
Adrian is the female character everyone wishes to be, gorgeous, cold, and incredibly brave to a point of almost cocky. I really admire her character even though she's manipulative and bitchy- aren't we all?
Alex was brilliant as well, defenitly a dream guy. He has way too much charm for his own good. Alex and Adrian's fights had me spitting with laughter-well maybe not spitting.. But yeh =)
Although Karen and Adrian's dad got on my nerves a bit, not because I dislike how you wrote them but because they are so close minded and it frustrated me how easily hypocritical they could be. Especially with all that "im an adult you are a child" crap that parents love to pull.
Quentin was another favorite of course. Trevor as well. God I just loved all of them.
So enough with my rambling! You don't want to hear more compliments im sure =)
xx
1/29/2008 c18 Salvia
Quentin's my new love :D:D
Quentin's my new love :D:D
1/28/2008 c26 138iliveinadreamworld
Fabulous story, it was definitely worth the read. I rarely ever read a completed story on FP, I prefer starting before I get overwhelmed, but this story intrigued me so much I read it in 2 days. :)
The characters were well thought out and even at their worst moments, most of them were likeable. I really loved Travis btw. :) He's such a great guy.
Your writing is excellent, granted I'm not a person who swears and I don't like reading it, but still the story's amazing.
You're an amazing writer, very talented, and I love this story.
Fabulous story, it was definitely worth the read. I rarely ever read a completed story on FP, I prefer starting before I get overwhelmed, but this story intrigued me so much I read it in 2 days. :)
The characters were well thought out and even at their worst moments, most of them were likeable. I really loved Travis btw. :) He's such a great guy.
Your writing is excellent, granted I'm not a person who swears and I don't like reading it, but still the story's amazing.
You're an amazing writer, very talented, and I love this story.
1/27/2008 c26 Britster
I love you man. Seriously.
I love you man. Seriously.
1/27/2008 c26 Norel
It is definitely different from the original, but still good. Although, I do think that the fact that they are stepsiblings should have caused a bit more conflict, and maybe more emphasis should have been drawn to that fact. But all in all, the chemistry building is what I liked most about this story. My favorite chapter was the one where she went to the party after Jason broke up with her; now that was a hell of a chapter! That sex scene wasn't as hot as the one in the original, but still good, nonetheless.
It is definitely different from the original, but still good. Although, I do think that the fact that they are stepsiblings should have caused a bit more conflict, and maybe more emphasis should have been drawn to that fact. But all in all, the chemistry building is what I liked most about this story. My favorite chapter was the one where she went to the party after Jason broke up with her; now that was a hell of a chapter! That sex scene wasn't as hot as the one in the original, but still good, nonetheless.