for Trust Me5/25/2008 c3 
5moonwalkerAspen
It's good. Just like Sweetheart. But I wanna know why she doesn't want to like any guys?
5moonwalkerAspenIt's good. Just like Sweetheart. But I wanna know why she doesn't want to like any guys?
5/19/2008 c3 2xlovexpollutionx
“Mike is just fatter than a pregnant elephant.”
best line EVER. i'm going to have to mention that one to cat. :D it's all from the wendy's, baby.
oh so i got a new honesty box message FROM A MALE: "you rock". yeah, um, i totally do. i replied: "thanks, you rock as well." because i always thank my kind honesty boxers. HONESTY BOXERS. like guenevere's robe (remember? in tess?)!
i also like the will shoutout. bravissimo.
and this update was buenissimo. it deserves more love than it's getting!
2xlovexpollutionx“Mike is just fatter than a pregnant elephant.”
best line EVER. i'm going to have to mention that one to cat. :D it's all from the wendy's, baby.
oh so i got a new honesty box message FROM A MALE: "you rock". yeah, um, i totally do. i replied: "thanks, you rock as well." because i always thank my kind honesty boxers. HONESTY BOXERS. like guenevere's robe (remember? in tess?)!
i also like the will shoutout. bravissimo.
and this update was buenissimo. it deserves more love than it's getting!
3/7/2008 c2 2ObliviousWanderer
OH ME GOSH! I LOVE JAKE TOO! He's awesome. But I loev this story so much more. You' written so many more chapters! WHy did you take them down? why? Brooke is cool to.
Please Update soon. *puppy eyes*
Because then, I shall review for each chapter you write. Sound fair?...Yeah I thought so too. Here's to non-Review-Dodger-er-er...er...er...s.
Anyway...I'm off
Ciao
2ObliviousWandererOH ME GOSH! I LOVE JAKE TOO! He's awesome. But I loev this story so much more. You' written so many more chapters! WHy did you take them down? why? Brooke is cool to.
Please Update soon. *puppy eyes*
Because then, I shall review for each chapter you write. Sound fair?...Yeah I thought so too. Here's to non-Review-Dodger-er-er...er...er...s.
Anyway...I'm off
Ciao
3/4/2008 c1 4E. Collins
This is really good! I like it better then the old first chapter. I hope you post the next chapter soon
4E. CollinsThis is really good! I like it better then the old first chapter. I hope you post the next chapter soon
3/2/2008 c1 12OnceADreamer
Ahh, it has been a while since I've read an interesting, imaginative, and well thought-out romance story on fictionpress. Please continue!
12OnceADreamerAhh, it has been a while since I've read an interesting, imaginative, and well thought-out romance story on fictionpress. Please continue!
1/7/2008 c7 2ObliviousWanderer
Why is it, that all authors I like...lurvv writing cliffies! Do you understand the mental strain, you put on some of us? Just Kiddin. :) Really good writing...but I have a question...if thats cool with you. Is Brooke a tomboy? well...thats it really. Oh and make sure you update son!
Signed
ObliviousWanderer
2ObliviousWandererWhy is it, that all authors I like...lurvv writing cliffies! Do you understand the mental strain, you put on some of us? Just Kiddin. :) Really good writing...but I have a question...if thats cool with you. Is Brooke a tomboy? well...thats it really. Oh and make sure you update son!
Signed
ObliviousWanderer
1/6/2008 c7 2xlovexpollutionx
well. you have forced me to review with your evil powers.
*rolls eyes*
haha.
i reviewed. you know it's good (at least you know i think it's good). not much for me to criticise here.
2xlovexpollutionxwell. you have forced me to review with your evil powers.
*rolls eyes*
haha.
i reviewed. you know it's good (at least you know i think it's good). not much for me to criticise here.
1/6/2008 c6 xlovexpollutionx
i clicked the button. it should have been left-hand but i won't bother you with that.
muahaha.
at least there wasn't an appearance of...well. you're not getting smacked.
MASHED POTATO ECLAIRS. that was our thing. how awesome. maybe they'll make a cameo in FU...
i clicked the button. it should have been left-hand but i won't bother you with that.
muahaha.
at least there wasn't an appearance of...well. you're not getting smacked.
MASHED POTATO ECLAIRS. that was our thing. how awesome. maybe they'll make a cameo in FU...
1/6/2008 c7 lynda b
please write what happens! this reminds me SO much of my camp, even though there was no love story - but still. i want to go back to camp now!
please write what happens! this reminds me SO much of my camp, even though there was no love story - but still. i want to go back to camp now!
1/5/2008 c7 4E. Collins
I have to admit, cliffhangers are great ways to end chapters...But Why?Why couldn't it have just gone an incy weency bit further! ... Okay I'm done with my episode... Hope you post the next chapter soon!I really like the story!
4E. CollinsI have to admit, cliffhangers are great ways to end chapters...But Why?Why couldn't it have just gone an incy weency bit further! ... Okay I'm done with my episode... Hope you post the next chapter soon!I really like the story!
1/5/2008 c7 adnama3121
Ahh...You did the name thing again, his name is Logan from what I remember, not Landon (or, I think it was Lorenzo or Laurel or something last time), lol Anyways...update, update, update (I'm hoping if you say the word enough times, you'll be convinced to hurry up with the updates, lol), update, update.
Whew, I'm annoying aren't I? Sorry, I won't write that word anymore.
~Amanda~
Ahh...You did the name thing again, his name is Logan from what I remember, not Landon (or, I think it was Lorenzo or Laurel or something last time), lol Anyways...update, update, update (I'm hoping if you say the word enough times, you'll be convinced to hurry up with the updates, lol), update, update.
Whew, I'm annoying aren't I? Sorry, I won't write that word anymore.
~Amanda~
1/3/2008 c6 E. Collins
This is really good! I really like it! Brooke reminds me a little bit of myself (except I"m not as untrusting as her.) I hope you post the next chapter soon!
This is really good! I really like it! Brooke reminds me a little bit of myself (except I"m not as untrusting as her.) I hope you post the next chapter soon!