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1/17/2007 c1 11beatrice is hot
I like your prose better than your poetry.
1/13/2007 c1 M. Williams
I liked this message, if you will, a lot to. I know someone who is precisely like the girl described in the story, and I think you did a good job of portraying someone like that.

I didn't like the end of the last sentence. It was great up until "...and chased away both, alone..." but after that, it just.. seemed weird. I might be crazy, who knows?

Good story!

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