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1/17/2007 c1 8Silent Troll
The part of the poem that stood out for me was the lines "White shadows fall,

And black light gleams".

I like how you changed and/or reversed the imagery. Like, I'd probably see something instead like "black shadows fall, And white light gleams".

The image is something you can't perfectly see...but you can see it, too, in your own imagination. You can't see this exactly in reality.

It was neat to think about!

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