for Of Service and Ice Cream7/17/2007 c1 
1eliza-smiles
omgosh...i couldnt stop laughing when she blew the rasberry...hahaha funny as... cant wait to read some more...cheers, eliza
1eliza-smilesomgosh...i couldnt stop laughing when she blew the rasberry...hahaha funny as... cant wait to read some more...cheers, eliza
1/15/2007 c1 7jinx89
lovely! I should probably mention I'm a new reader before I start rambling off about what a great story this is. Or, at least, the first chapter is great. Ur character kinda reminds me of me. I'm usually very sarcastic...ahem. Moving on: I liked this chapter. It gives a good idea of what the characters are like. It also shows a lot about Ellie. So, yeah, coolness. Keep it up!
7jinx89lovely! I should probably mention I'm a new reader before I start rambling off about what a great story this is. Or, at least, the first chapter is great. Ur character kinda reminds me of me. I'm usually very sarcastic...ahem. Moving on: I liked this chapter. It gives a good idea of what the characters are like. It also shows a lot about Ellie. So, yeah, coolness. Keep it up!
1/15/2007 c1 Jenny G
I like this so far, but I want to see more people interaction and conversation. El's voice is interesting to listen to, I like her and I normally don't like first person POVs.
Ellie's just one big kid, just like me! Please continue this story, I know you don't have the best record of continuing stories, but that doesn't mean anything. Continue this one. And what's the thing about service? I get the ice cream part but so far no community sevice detail.
I like this so far, but I want to see more people interaction and conversation. El's voice is interesting to listen to, I like her and I normally don't like first person POVs.
Ellie's just one big kid, just like me! Please continue this story, I know you don't have the best record of continuing stories, but that doesn't mean anything. Continue this one. And what's the thing about service? I get the ice cream part but so far no community sevice detail.