for Allison Wonderland5/5/2014 c1 
1BelievesInUnicorns
Your story is amazing and it really touched my heart. I sincerely hope you become a published author because your stories are amazing!
I couldn't stop crying while reading this!
BelievesInUnicorns xx
1BelievesInUnicornsYour story is amazing and it really touched my heart. I sincerely hope you become a published author because your stories are amazing!
I couldn't stop crying while reading this!
BelievesInUnicorns xx
11/13/2013 c37 2Linq
Well even if it hasn't been published, I have to say that I loved this story and how heartbreaking it was. A beautiful mess!
So thanks for writing this and I hope you haven't given up on your dream of becoming a published author!
2LinqWell even if it hasn't been published, I have to say that I loved this story and how heartbreaking it was. A beautiful mess!
So thanks for writing this and I hope you haven't given up on your dream of becoming a published author!
11/9/2013 c37 Leila
Holy shit. That was so fucked up, but so good.
Holy shit. That was so fucked up, but so good.
1/2/2013 c37 109so silver bright
I'm gonna PM you about how I thought about this story :) I have a ton to say!
109so silver brightI'm gonna PM you about how I thought about this story :) I have a ton to say!
12/9/2012 c27 tiltedHead
Good writing and good luck in your writing, this story should be told to the whole world.)
Good writing and good luck in your writing, this story should be told to the whole world.)
8/5/2012 c37 Guest
This is a wonderful book, and you are an amazing writer. I relly hope that you have further sucsess, I have little doubt that you wont, your determind and I can't wait to walk into a bookshop and see your name on the self.
This is a wonderful book, and you are an amazing writer. I relly hope that you have further sucsess, I have little doubt that you wont, your determind and I can't wait to walk into a bookshop and see your name on the self.
7/31/2012 c26 1chewingonpearls
This story was beautiful! Sad, but beautiful! I'm not the kind of girl that's into all that smoking, and cutting, and that type of music (though, I do enjoy a drink or two...or eight?), and that apathy towards life, but a lot of this really stuck with me and made me think. At first, I thought that type of lifestyle was kinda foolish, but now I see how it can be appealing to people, and I don't want to sound cliche or anything, but I've realized you don't choose that lifestyle, it kinda chooses you. This was really awesome! Your style is descriptive enough that I get the point, but not too wordy. The fact that I was able to empathize with most of the characters is awesome! The blur that became Allison's life was so striking and realistic to me. All in all, this was an amazing story! I loved every minute of it, and I think I've read it quicker than I have any story because it's just one of those stories that easy to read, and gets to the point. Marvelous, marvelous job, I honestly can't explain to you how much I enjoyed this!
You are truly talented!
-Sydney
1chewingonpearlsThis story was beautiful! Sad, but beautiful! I'm not the kind of girl that's into all that smoking, and cutting, and that type of music (though, I do enjoy a drink or two...or eight?), and that apathy towards life, but a lot of this really stuck with me and made me think. At first, I thought that type of lifestyle was kinda foolish, but now I see how it can be appealing to people, and I don't want to sound cliche or anything, but I've realized you don't choose that lifestyle, it kinda chooses you. This was really awesome! Your style is descriptive enough that I get the point, but not too wordy. The fact that I was able to empathize with most of the characters is awesome! The blur that became Allison's life was so striking and realistic to me. All in all, this was an amazing story! I loved every minute of it, and I think I've read it quicker than I have any story because it's just one of those stories that easy to read, and gets to the point. Marvelous, marvelous job, I honestly can't explain to you how much I enjoyed this!
You are truly talented!
-Sydney
7/31/2012 c27 moyans
this was a reallly reallly great story, it's really depressing though. Great job.
BTW : I LOVE MICHEAL 3
this was a reallly reallly great story, it's really depressing though. Great job.
BTW : I LOVE MICHEAL 3
7/31/2012 c22 moyans
I SO SO SO SOOOOOOOO hope she leaves "verge" he knows whats best for her? you got her on drugs drinking liqour and having sex. Micheal is good for her. i hope shes gets with him :c
I SO SO SO SOOOOOOOO hope she leaves "verge" he knows whats best for her? you got her on drugs drinking liqour and having sex. Micheal is good for her. i hope shes gets with him :c
11/26/2011 c26 2MuffinsRoxSox
This story was absolutely amazing. I actually read this story a little while ago and forgot to review, so I just wanted to review and tell you that this is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read.
2MuffinsRoxSoxThis story was absolutely amazing. I actually read this story a little while ago and forgot to review, so I just wanted to review and tell you that this is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read.
11/18/2011 c26 beesandlove
In my opinion, this story was incredibly poorly written. The grammar was awful, the characters two-dimensional and the plot nonsensical. As a sufferer of mental illness, I found the portrayal of such suffering quite ridiculous; people do not just wake up one day and decide to be bulimic just because their friend has told them to be. I was also offended by the fact that Allison was raped and then no more was said of it. Issues such as bulimia and sexual abuse were not touched on as they should have been, but were just added into the story and then forgotten about as no more than additions to fill up the slow-moving plot.
Something that really bothered me about this was that the author did not bother about minor details, such as legal complications. So this girl Allison was involved in a three-way murder and no one thought to investigate or sentence her with anything? I'm afraid the law does not work like that. In fact, the whole world does not work like that - as every single character was two-dimensional, obvious and predictable. In other words, the author should not give up her day job.
In my opinion, this story was incredibly poorly written. The grammar was awful, the characters two-dimensional and the plot nonsensical. As a sufferer of mental illness, I found the portrayal of such suffering quite ridiculous; people do not just wake up one day and decide to be bulimic just because their friend has told them to be. I was also offended by the fact that Allison was raped and then no more was said of it. Issues such as bulimia and sexual abuse were not touched on as they should have been, but were just added into the story and then forgotten about as no more than additions to fill up the slow-moving plot.
Something that really bothered me about this was that the author did not bother about minor details, such as legal complications. So this girl Allison was involved in a three-way murder and no one thought to investigate or sentence her with anything? I'm afraid the law does not work like that. In fact, the whole world does not work like that - as every single character was two-dimensional, obvious and predictable. In other words, the author should not give up her day job.
11/10/2011 c1 2Among-the-Vampires
So I've read this story before. :) and I was thinking about it the other day, and i just had to log back on here so i could read it again. I really like this story. I just thought you should know it made a lasting impression with me. :)
2Among-the-VampiresSo I've read this story before. :) and I was thinking about it the other day, and i just had to log back on here so i could read it again. I really like this story. I just thought you should know it made a lasting impression with me. :)