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16SarahMerriman
Very beautiful imagery. This is definately one of those poems a person can tell has had a lot of thought put into it. I love the description Liberating life. You are very talented. Keep it up ;)
16SarahMerrimanVery beautiful imagery. This is definately one of those poems a person can tell has had a lot of thought put into it. I love the description Liberating life. You are very talented. Keep it up ;)
11/11/2007 c1 15greenGalilee
Wonderful imagery here. The poem thrives on description, and the effect is quite nice.
Good job.
15greenGalileeWonderful imagery here. The poem thrives on description, and the effect is quite nice.
Good job.
1/31/2007 c1 11beatrice is hot
I like this okay. I read through it a few times and while "night full of mirrors" didn't really speak to me the first times, I adjusted to it and now I think you're quite clever in this poem.
(in case there's any confusion, this is a "good" review.)
11beatrice is hotI like this okay. I read through it a few times and while "night full of mirrors" didn't really speak to me the first times, I adjusted to it and now I think you're quite clever in this poem.
(in case there's any confusion, this is a "good" review.)
1/16/2007 c1 1lagunaobsession5
HELLO YEEGER
i love your new story. your such a talented writer. you are soo awesome. keep the poems coming!
1lagunaobsession5HELLO YEEGER
i love your new story. your such a talented writer. you are soo awesome. keep the poems coming!