
4/29/2020 c1 Guest
I wish you would finish this. It’s so well written
I wish you would finish this. It’s so well written
6/29/2013 c17 Guest
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where did you go?
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where did you go?
10/30/2012 c1 jmn23
its been long since you lasst updated. this story really have lots of potential. i miss dev and rea. i do hope you will continue soon and have the chance to finish this wonderful story.
its been long since you lasst updated. this story really have lots of potential. i miss dev and rea. i do hope you will continue soon and have the chance to finish this wonderful story.
8/29/2012 c17 Marite
Your story is super! not going to lie its better than loads of books i've actually bought and paid for. I hope The next chapter comes soon!
Your story is super! not going to lie its better than loads of books i've actually bought and paid for. I hope The next chapter comes soon!
12/13/2011 c17 lucyreviewer
awesome no time to write a well rounded critique so ill just say its amazing
awesome no time to write a well rounded critique so ill just say its amazing
6/5/2011 c17 MeMe
I was looking through my stories when I found this one. You haven't updated in over a year! I really hope that you haven't abandoned this story. It really is such a good story. I hope you continue it.
I was looking through my stories when I found this one. You haven't updated in over a year! I really hope that you haven't abandoned this story. It really is such a good story. I hope you continue it.
4/28/2011 c14 avidmoonstar
Yay, I was totally right! It makes the story very exciting. It's too bad Albion lost his memories. It would have been great for them to truly be reunited. Back to reading!
Yay, I was totally right! It makes the story very exciting. It's too bad Albion lost his memories. It would have been great for them to truly be reunited. Back to reading!
4/28/2011 c11 avidmoonstar
Even though I hate spoilers, I feel I must ask. Is Albuin Rea's brother? I could be totally wrong, but that's what I feel the story is leading to. Besides that, I find this story exquisitely fascinating. I don't read fantasy stories very often, but when I do they always turn out to be good ones.
Even though I hate spoilers, I feel I must ask. Is Albuin Rea's brother? I could be totally wrong, but that's what I feel the story is leading to. Besides that, I find this story exquisitely fascinating. I don't read fantasy stories very often, but when I do they always turn out to be good ones.
2/9/2011 c17
1Jaliy
I really enjoyed reading this story. I think you've got a wonderful plot going. I also enjoyed the character portrayals. Good job!
I hope you continue writing this story!
Jaliy!~

I really enjoyed reading this story. I think you've got a wonderful plot going. I also enjoyed the character portrayals. Good job!
I hope you continue writing this story!
Jaliy!~
1/29/2011 c17 jmn23
Miss this story. Hopefully, uou'll update this story. It deserveds to be finished soon.
Miss this story. Hopefully, uou'll update this story. It deserveds to be finished soon.
1/6/2011 c17 Erythromania
I love the story so far! It's a bit confusing in some parts, but maybe it will clear up a bit as the story progresses?
It's pretty cool how you incorperated actual religous aspects and people in it :)
I can't wait for the next chappie! :P
I love the story so far! It's a bit confusing in some parts, but maybe it will clear up a bit as the story progresses?
It's pretty cool how you incorperated actual religous aspects and people in it :)
I can't wait for the next chappie! :P
1/5/2011 c17
3Alinzar
I discovered this story while browsing the options availiable to me. I decided to give it a try. To say the least, I am in awe of your talent and I can't wait for more. I realize that you haven't updated in a while, and I was wondering why. Please, please, please update soon!
Thanks for the amazing story,
Eva

I discovered this story while browsing the options availiable to me. I decided to give it a try. To say the least, I am in awe of your talent and I can't wait for more. I realize that you haven't updated in a while, and I was wondering why. Please, please, please update soon!
Thanks for the amazing story,
Eva
12/25/2010 c17 MeMe
So I am absolutely in love with this story... the only problem is that you haven't updated since MARCH! And it is December...
I really do love this story... it's very different. It makes me think of Diane Duane's wizard books a little bit, but at the same time your story is unique.
I can't wait for an update!
So I am absolutely in love with this story... the only problem is that you haven't updated since MARCH! And it is December...
I really do love this story... it's very different. It makes me think of Diane Duane's wizard books a little bit, but at the same time your story is unique.
I can't wait for an update!