for white room1/28/2007 c1 
58ChildeOfChaos
Wow, what an awesome poem! I love this, great message and awesome metaphor here. Great work!
58ChildeOfChaosWow, what an awesome poem! I love this, great message and awesome metaphor here. Great work!
1/18/2007 c1 31i am valentine
interesting. preordained to die is an interesting concept, much appreciated by me, im glad to see something creative and deep. um yes. i enjoy your style : )
31i am valentineinteresting. preordained to die is an interesting concept, much appreciated by me, im glad to see something creative and deep. um yes. i enjoy your style : )
1/18/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
This is another "wow" for the day! I so happy to read this! I really love the way that you wrote this. Beautifully done!
I have to add it to my C2!
Best Wishes
59radioactive stanicaThis is another "wow" for the day! I so happy to read this! I really love the way that you wrote this. Beautifully done!
I have to add it to my C2!
Best Wishes
1/18/2007 c1 ode to a firefly
This is a good piece, and I like the idea behind it, but it could be better if the lines weren't broken up and it was written as prose instead of poetry.
This is a good piece, and I like the idea behind it, but it could be better if the lines weren't broken up and it was written as prose instead of poetry.