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1/23/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
That is just a gorgeous image you've painted. "flowers that breathe history" is a perfect line just on its own, and really, I think this is one of your strongest jorios yet. Beautiful work. Keep writing! :)
1/20/2007 c1 32eldrin
"Lying amidst the incardanine Flowers that breathe history" - what beautiful imagery...flowers breathing history is amazingly striking. This perfectly captures the feeling of someone important lost, unshown. These words are like a sadly sighing caress. Wonderful work.
1/19/2007 c1 134emeraude-irlandais
My, you are the polyglot, aren't you! "incarnadine" is not used often enough, neither is "stargaze". I love the wonderful imagery, as always. :) Lovely. `~bella~`
1/18/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
You always write such beautiful poetry! I have to add this to my C2!

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1/18/2007 c1 56felicia13
Aw ... sweet. Like honey or ... sugar. (I think the eloquence left me. not that there was any to leave to begin with ... -_-;;)

Lovely, lovely, lovely. Don't know what else to say. It's just a nice little thing. Thanks for the translation. I would have spent hours trying to figure out what it said otherwise.

Felicia.

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