for The Boozers1/26/2007 c1 
6laura pamela
Your stories just keep getting better and better - if you could add another chapter, that would be great! cya! xoxoxo
6laura pamelaYour stories just keep getting better and better - if you could add another chapter, that would be great! cya! xoxoxo
1/18/2007 c1 25a Cornucopia of Love
It's an interesting start to a story, but I think that the cursing a bit overwhelming. I mean, yeah, we all cuss (well, most of us! xD), and sometimes, the stuff that flies out of your mouth can be SO funny, but at the moment right now, it seems a bit unnecessary. I mean, this is just my opinion, but to me, you use it *so* much that it gets annoying to even read on. :O Like, oh, I don't know. It doesn't seem like the right place to me to have it. It doesn't *flow*. But that's my opinion. You're the author and you can do whatever you want! :D
25a Cornucopia of LoveIt's an interesting start to a story, but I think that the cursing a bit overwhelming. I mean, yeah, we all cuss (well, most of us! xD), and sometimes, the stuff that flies out of your mouth can be SO funny, but at the moment right now, it seems a bit unnecessary. I mean, this is just my opinion, but to me, you use it *so* much that it gets annoying to even read on. :O Like, oh, I don't know. It doesn't seem like the right place to me to have it. It doesn't *flow*. But that's my opinion. You're the author and you can do whatever you want! :D