for Am I?3/27/2008 c1 
3The Celtic Bard
Wow, I completely get this. It's like you mined into my very own mind and dug out all those troublesome little bits of question and stuck 'em on paper! Jeez, but they're buggers!
3The Celtic BardWow, I completely get this. It's like you mined into my very own mind and dug out all those troublesome little bits of question and stuck 'em on paper! Jeez, but they're buggers!
3/15/2007 c1 94AK the Twilight
This story is full of unknowing emotions, something many people suffer from, but asking yourself these questions makes the entire story unclear. It's more social at the beginning, how you interact with people, then it begins to go into suffering and what hurts. The barrage of questions is definitely good and it keeps the reader wanting to know, but you need to focus on a specific confusion. Is it social confused, or is it more towards the self. Think about what you want the piece to be as a whole instead of trying to weave through so much confusion. Outside of that, it's a fine piece and keeps going at an interesting pace. Great job, on the whole.
94AK the TwilightThis story is full of unknowing emotions, something many people suffer from, but asking yourself these questions makes the entire story unclear. It's more social at the beginning, how you interact with people, then it begins to go into suffering and what hurts. The barrage of questions is definitely good and it keeps the reader wanting to know, but you need to focus on a specific confusion. Is it social confused, or is it more towards the self. Think about what you want the piece to be as a whole instead of trying to weave through so much confusion. Outside of that, it's a fine piece and keeps going at an interesting pace. Great job, on the whole.