
1/14/2008 c1
43lookin4nemo
i love this ...holy cow amazing especiall the one verse that says...red eyes make mine bluer...amazing.

i love this ...holy cow amazing especiall the one verse that says...red eyes make mine bluer...amazing.
1/20/2007 c1
81Princess-anna57
Very well written. I like every stanza! Hehe. Always be positive, and keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^

Very well written. I like every stanza! Hehe. Always be positive, and keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
1/20/2007 c1
145BellonaFlayreRiver
please dont tell me this is what i think it is. but it was very well put. i like the "red eys make mine bluer" it works really well. lovely.

please dont tell me this is what i think it is. but it was very well put. i like the "red eys make mine bluer" it works really well. lovely.