for Dawn and Remedios4/23/2008 c1 
3Estelin
this story was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more of your work
3Estelinthis story was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more of your work
1/21/2007 c1 4S.R.Kelley
holy crap thats long!GOOD but long try to make the entries slightly,extreamly shorter!i like it though!
4S.R.Kelleyholy crap thats long!GOOD but long try to make the entries slightly,extreamly shorter!i like it though!