for Shelby and the Boys2/3/2008 c1 
5Star-princess14
This story is amazing! You did a wonderful job so far. The only thing i suggest you do is tell their ages. I keep thinking that Angel is much younger at some points. But other than that keep on writting!
5Star-princess14This story is amazing! You did a wonderful job so far. The only thing i suggest you do is tell their ages. I keep thinking that Angel is much younger at some points. But other than that keep on writting!
4/1/2007 c2 little fox demon
woa talk about noise i think this will have more drama then a soap opera i thought demons would be a bit more put together then that then aiden but i still like it
woa talk about noise i think this will have more drama then a soap opera i thought demons would be a bit more put together then that then aiden but i still like it