for Preconceived Notions2/3/2016 c6 slcjnk2008
This is a great story and I'm looking forward to reading the whole story. Also, thanks for your pen name, it makes it so much easier looking for your ebooks on my kindle.
This is a great story and I'm looking forward to reading the whole story. Also, thanks for your pen name, it makes it so much easier looking for your ebooks on my kindle.
1/31/2016 c12 BeverlyAmethyst
Aw I absolutely loved the chapter! Glad they opened up and told each other their stories, I think it'll really help them understand each other. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Aw I absolutely loved the chapter! Glad they opened up and told each other their stories, I think it'll really help them understand each other. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
1/27/2016 c11 
3TheClosetWriter16
Wow over two years since I last read this! Just reread the whole story and loved it :) Great chapter! I really hope you update soon.
3TheClosetWriter16Wow over two years since I last read this! Just reread the whole story and loved it :) Great chapter! I really hope you update soon.
11/13/2013 c9 3Smartgirl94
You got to love it when someone interrupts something hot and heavy lol. Please update soon :D
3Smartgirl94You got to love it when someone interrupts something hot and heavy lol. Please update soon :D
10/27/2013 c8 skye real
SWEET! I am really loving the latest development in their relationship. At least they are starting out with friendship ;)
SWEET! I am really loving the latest development in their relationship. At least they are starting out with friendship ;)
10/27/2013 c8 foxyricanlady
I love his grandmother...She sounds lovely I hope she gets better soon. The only thing I didn't like is that it was to short PLEASE update soon
I love his grandmother...She sounds lovely I hope she gets better soon. The only thing I didn't like is that it was to short PLEASE update soon
10/26/2013 c8 TheClosetWriter16
Ahaha Jack, I love you.
Amazing chapter :D Everything is just so well written! Update soon ;)
Ahaha Jack, I love you.
Amazing chapter :D Everything is just so well written! Update soon ;)
10/20/2013 c7 foxyricanlady
Wow a man that's taking care of his grandmother is a great man... that's like ten points in his favor. Hahaha great chapter can't wait for the next one...
Wow a man that's taking care of his grandmother is a great man... that's like ten points in his favor. Hahaha great chapter can't wait for the next one...
10/19/2013 c7 Jester79
Uh oh, something going on with Mr Brewer. At least Shy can see some humanity within Jack regarding his grandmother. Still loving this.
Uh oh, something going on with Mr Brewer. At least Shy can see some humanity within Jack regarding his grandmother. Still loving this.
10/17/2013 c6 skye real
Oh yeah, go Jack! if you want her, go get her! I like that she's unconsciously leading him on a wild goose chase! thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next one :)
Oh yeah, go Jack! if you want her, go get her! I like that she's unconsciously leading him on a wild goose chase! thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next one :)