for Preconceived Notions1/28/2007 c2 
4In.the.Wardrobe
heh. loved the ending of this chapter. good story so far and i cant wait for more. update soon!
4In.the.Wardrobeheh. loved the ending of this chapter. good story so far and i cant wait for more. update soon!
1/28/2007 c2 15Nikkole15
Hahahaha, poor girl. Hahaha.
I love this story already and you're only on chapter 2!
So Cheyenne isn't ugly, and Dane is just a nervous virgin, even though he isn't.
Does Dane have drinking issuses?
Hmm, makes me wonder.
Please...
UPDATE SOON!
-Nikkole
15Nikkole15Hahahaha, poor girl. Hahaha.
I love this story already and you're only on chapter 2!
So Cheyenne isn't ugly, and Dane is just a nervous virgin, even though he isn't.
Does Dane have drinking issuses?
Hmm, makes me wonder.
Please...
UPDATE SOON!
-Nikkole
1/28/2007 c2 Heartbreaker10
OMG I love this story so far..your characters are fantastic lol! please update soon! cuz i cant wait
OMG I love this story so far..your characters are fantastic lol! please update soon! cuz i cant wait
1/25/2007 c1 Alenor
hmm...interesting. dane does sound rather arrogant. i can't wait for more ~ Alenor.
hmm...interesting. dane does sound rather arrogant. i can't wait for more ~ Alenor.
1/22/2007 c1 Heartbreaker10
haha your characters are great so far and im feelin this story already! cant wait for the next update! :)
haha your characters are great so far and im feelin this story already! cant wait for the next update! :)
1/22/2007 c1 13Natajaaay
thats so embarrassing when that happens! you don't mean to insult them (most of the time) and then when you try to apologise it just seems even worse!
anyway, loved it, now i just have to put my memory to the test and remember to read the next chapter...or i could write it down! woot, go me!
13Natajaaaythats so embarrassing when that happens! you don't mean to insult them (most of the time) and then when you try to apologise it just seems even worse!
anyway, loved it, now i just have to put my memory to the test and remember to read the next chapter...or i could write it down! woot, go me!
1/22/2007 c1 15Nikkole15
Yay, you're back, I was beginning to wonder if you left us forever.
I like the idea of this story, of course, your work is always amazing. Couldn't be any less.
Oh and are you going to be updating the other story in the process? It's okay if your not. :)
UPDATE SOON!
-Nikkole
15Nikkole15Yay, you're back, I was beginning to wonder if you left us forever.
I like the idea of this story, of course, your work is always amazing. Couldn't be any less.
Oh and are you going to be updating the other story in the process? It's okay if your not. :)
UPDATE SOON!
-Nikkole
1/22/2007 c1 123123123123123po
o0o0o0o new story YAAY!
are you also gonna finish you old one? and this ones sound interesting
o0o0o0o new story YAAY!
are you also gonna finish you old one? and this ones sound interesting
1/22/2007 c1 Oh Blue Lass
Hooray. Love your work, great to see you back! Keep it up, very tempting/promising start!
Hooray. Love your work, great to see you back! Keep it up, very tempting/promising start!
1/21/2007 c1 Gintaras
A really nice beginning, i liked this - especially Cheyenne's depressed mood, it made her seem like a very real person. Dane is an interesting character so far, although he seems like the typical hateable/irresistible guy and I'm looking forward to seeing how his character develops.
The only problem that really stood out at me was this bit "She was relieved to count all her employees car's were present". It should be "employee's cars", I think.
Anyway, apart from that I think this story has a great beginning and I'd like to read more.
A really nice beginning, i liked this - especially Cheyenne's depressed mood, it made her seem like a very real person. Dane is an interesting character so far, although he seems like the typical hateable/irresistible guy and I'm looking forward to seeing how his character develops.
The only problem that really stood out at me was this bit "She was relieved to count all her employees car's were present". It should be "employee's cars", I think.
Anyway, apart from that I think this story has a great beginning and I'd like to read more.