
2/16/2007 c1
70cmetalangel249
It breaks my heart...I think we all know someone like that. This poem makes me sad, and it makes me want to be able to look deeper inside people...

It breaks my heart...I think we all know someone like that. This poem makes me sad, and it makes me want to be able to look deeper inside people...
1/22/2007 c1 Tytherpol
I really like this.
The last couple of lines appeared to be maybe trying too hard, but it is a pretty poem.
Good job. ~Always, Sara
I really like this.
The last couple of lines appeared to be maybe trying too hard, but it is a pretty poem.
Good job. ~Always, Sara