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4/7/2008 c1 Artemis Rampant
Well, I read this as a standalone, but now I really want to read the whole thing. This was cute :-). Stupid Whats-her-face-slut.
12/22/2007 c1 9Stahlut
this was cool, i really liked it. and good job of getting into male perspective and the third person use was good as well.
12/8/2007 c1 3shy green rock
It was cute, but I suppose that this happened before the very end of Fateful Friday where she tells him that she loves him right? You did say that this was only the spring break of his first year?
12/7/2007 c1 x3life
aw i like alex! =) hes the clique perfect boyfriendd. haha. lovedd the one-shott
11/14/2007 c1 1pretentious fXXX
i loved it...though i was worried they wldnt get back...n i think u did a gud job of the guy perspective...sometimes it seems like its a girl trying to write like a guy but here it was perfect...i want a boyfriend like Alex...
11/12/2007 c1 taylor
haha.!

i'm back.

i had to read it.

and, i did.

and i very much liked it.

i really do like the realtionship between the two of them. everyone knows that realtionships are piture perfect, you have to fight to get through it, and this really shows it.

sorry for spelling and typing mistakes. wayy early for me to be up and typing.. but yes.

i approve, very much so. not that you needed my approval, but you know what i mean, right?

well.

i am on to read more of your stuff.

:]

xoxo.

taylor
11/7/2007 c1 8angels and airwaves
Lydia is such a skank! I got really riled up with her shameless seduction! :O I would've moped for the whole day if he didn't manage to win Angie back but HAPPY ENDING, so YAY! :D Well done! :)
11/3/2007 c1 2you're my cup of tea
soo cute.

totally made my day =]
10/12/2007 c1 Ze Zellen
~sigh~

I love Alex. He is so cool!

That Lydia person is a big fat slut! When she was straddling him, I was thinking 'Slap her, Alex! SLAP HER!'

Ahh. Fluff is the best, and you write it so well!

It makes me happy...

~Ze Zellen~
10/12/2007 c1 CanesFanCatty
aww, this was very cute! loved it!
10/7/2007 c1 Frosted Cranberry
Sweet!
9/4/2007 c1 1EasilyDamaged
Aw I loved this. :D
8/31/2007 c1 SapphireEyes16
he got her a necklace tht was so sweet!
8/28/2007 c1 1OrangeStar13
it's actually a cute title so don't worry. :)

you know for a moment there, well, the first paragraph, i thought he was going to end up with that girl linda, sean's hook-up! haha
8/16/2007 c1 turtle24
O, so good. I love you're writing. I'm addicted. Okay, maybe not addicted, you get the idea...anyway, I loved this. I really got into the characters, especially Alex, you did a good job with him here.

Anyway, I think I'll go read FF now, since I'm into the characters and from what you said in your closing, it looks like this was like a sidestory to that one?

Anyway, great job.

And yes, this did work well as a stand alone, I wasn't confused at all, great job.
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