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31synapse collapse
Hum. Lit Hon must have really drilled stuff into your head. :) Damn you improved like crazy.
/He discovered it the day it rained.
I like that. It concludes the chapter very well. The way you formatted it though, it sounds almost like a poem. :O Although, there's nothing bad about that. XD Finish it Chris.
AND YOU POO. I had to go through tons of my stats (random ppl who faved/alerted me) to find you. D: It only took me forever.
31synapse collapseHum. Lit Hon must have really drilled stuff into your head. :) Damn you improved like crazy.
/He discovered it the day it rained.
I like that. It concludes the chapter very well. The way you formatted it though, it sounds almost like a poem. :O Although, there's nothing bad about that. XD Finish it Chris.
AND YOU POO. I had to go through tons of my stats (random ppl who faved/alerted me) to find you. D: It only took me forever.
1/24/2007 c2 12ohboypizza
I like this story already, the character seems to have a softer side to being a bloody torture murderer.
12ohboypizzaI like this story already, the character seems to have a softer side to being a bloody torture murderer.