for circular2/25/2007 c1 
54kaylajac
i'm not going to say it makes much sense to me [i was warned] but that makes it seem terribly fascinating. i like the tarot cards theme- you pulled it off well.
54kaylajaci'm not going to say it makes much sense to me [i was warned] but that makes it seem terribly fascinating. i like the tarot cards theme- you pulled it off well.
2/7/2007 c1 11Chemically Induced
yeah i dont know your allusion material, so thanks for those footnotes. :) i promise onw day ill know them all. this poem is wonderful. seriously, it sounds like a spindown to some stromwild personal conclusion. like you said: it makes little sense, except to me. but! i can still enjoy the sound work and the attractive motion within. amazing. you are better than me. :)
love, c.induced.
11Chemically Inducedyeah i dont know your allusion material, so thanks for those footnotes. :) i promise onw day ill know them all. this poem is wonderful. seriously, it sounds like a spindown to some stromwild personal conclusion. like you said: it makes little sense, except to me. but! i can still enjoy the sound work and the attractive motion within. amazing. you are better than me. :)
love, c.induced.
1/31/2007 c1 the naked civil servant
Rimbaud is God.
On another note, this is most pleasing. I cannot pretend I understand all its nuances, but the footnotes were most informative (congratulations, by the way, this is the first poem I have ever seen with footnotes - you're such an intellectual :p).
I like the breakdown of coherance at the end, sounds most deranged, you know? & of course anything to do with Tarot just rules.
Favourite line :
and you have become the cold
creeping under my clothes
while i am burning
up here on this deck.
AH...
Rimbaud is God.
On another note, this is most pleasing. I cannot pretend I understand all its nuances, but the footnotes were most informative (congratulations, by the way, this is the first poem I have ever seen with footnotes - you're such an intellectual :p).
I like the breakdown of coherance at the end, sounds most deranged, you know? & of course anything to do with Tarot just rules.
Favourite line :
and you have become the cold
creeping under my clothes
while i am burning
up here on this deck.
AH...
1/23/2007 c1 17Cum grano saltis
You are right, it is kind of confusing, but I really like it, it somehow speaks to me. well done.
17Cum grano saltisYou are right, it is kind of confusing, but I really like it, it somehow speaks to me. well done.