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1/23/2007 c1 32eldrin
I love the repetition! Using parts of each stanza in the next creates a beautiful fluidity/continuence that is entrancingly compelling. "The disarmed artist/And the umbrella/transcendent" is lovely. You use some wonderful phrasework here. I'm going to have to read more of your work. Good poem.

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