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1/17/2010 c1 5Liam Cottam
Really good, I think you achieve a great sense of musicality through your use of both rhyme and metre. My only disappointment is that it didn't go on longer. More please. (May I advise submitting to wDOTthefictionshelfDOTcom the web site only publishes the best of submissions and this one is looking good.)
8/20/2007 c1 32Serason
I know very little about Iambic Pentameter, only what I learned in High School English, but I think you did a great job.

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