for Outfaced by the Dew1/17/2010 c1 
5Liam Cottam
Really good, I think you achieve a great sense of musicality through your use of both rhyme and metre. My only disappointment is that it didn't go on longer. More please. (May I advise submitting to wDOTthefictionshelfDOTcom the web site only publishes the best of submissions and this one is looking good.)
5Liam CottamReally good, I think you achieve a great sense of musicality through your use of both rhyme and metre. My only disappointment is that it didn't go on longer. More please. (May I advise submitting to wDOTthefictionshelfDOTcom the web site only publishes the best of submissions and this one is looking good.)