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7/13/2017 c1 Just a stranger
You probably haven't been on this site for a while, but I felt guilty not saying this. But a fanfiction writer Mister Inconsistent has used your story (basically word for word). Sorry I didn't find out sooner.
10/28/2013 c15 An Unfinished Angel
Aww that's so romantic! Lydia and Jay make such a cute couple! And I like how there's a second plot in this story about Lydia's father too. It seems like it's been a long time since you've last updated :(
2/7/2013 c16 1BrownEyedCutie99
Are you planning of continuing the story? I enjoyed it.
8/31/2012 c16 leavemeialone
I found the plot of this story to be hilarious. Who would actually tell the police that that guy was stealing from the neighbor? I actually really like Jay. He ends being the person that she turns or bumps into when it is her toughest or saddest moments. I feel like he is genuinely a good guy, but I want to know his story. Why was he trying to steal from Lydia and the neighbors' house? Who actually stole from his house? Is he lying? I believe him, but the answer is not resolved. I need some closure there. As for Jay and Lydia, I do hope they work out. They have great chemistry. But, it worries me that both Leslie and Kat are wary of Jay. It makes me wonder if he is a good guy. I do hope that you update this. I know that I have a lot of questions and want to get some answers! Thanks!
7/17/2012 c16 Bubbly Girl
Please update! I just love this story! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
10/20/2011 c16 ColourCascade
I like how Jay and Lydia met, personally. That would be a nice story to tell to the kiddies :) Update again soon please!
7/29/2011 c16 9Binkybaby
i loved it. update soon!
5/21/2011 c16 1guardian-of-the-seven-sins
Cuteness ^^
2/28/2011 c16 6Autumn Blaze
Please update soon :D

I love this story. You describe the settings and characters relationships with each other so well, its almost like every time I'm reading a movie beings in my head.

The dialogue is so realistic and bubbly and fun, giving distinct personalities to each character. I LOVE IT.

Update soon. Pretty please with sugar on top xD , plus with one hundred gazillion dollars on the side :D

N.M
1/5/2011 c16 2P.Quill
wow you updated. I was beginning to think I'd go grey before we got another update haha. You better give us a nice big chapter with Jay and Lyd in it yeah? Okay go write now that you've read this.
1/4/2011 c1 1Selenion
Oh my Gawd me too. I had always had the urge to walk around my house naked. When I forget something I just walk out knowing no one is home. And after I take a shower, I liek to stay naked. Of course, after I am dried off.

(:
12/4/2010 c16 1matchutea
Aw, Please update. [:

Jay seems pretty cool , and flirtatious. ;D

I want a sister like Leslie.

I still can't believe Kat and Lydia haven't made up yet.

Anywaays amazing. ;D
12/2/2010 c16 Nadinerdrgz
i like your story is so good keep doing more lol oh and can you check out my story let me know what you think its my frist story its only about the character backgroung
11/30/2010 c1 2CityBlackOut
Holy shit hahahahaha damn!;)
11/29/2010 c16 1Stuck.In.Wonderland239
This story is amazing! I swear I smile and giggle every time a read a chapter. It can get really awkward when other people are in the same room as you.
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