
7/19/2008 c9 cerasylvania
loved it hope to read more. especailly like jays character.
loved it hope to read more. especailly like jays character.
7/4/2008 c9 sleepies
aww...tats sad. she left him to deal with the mess even tho she was kinda at fault. y won't she trust him? =( looking forward to the updates ^-^
aww...tats sad. she left him to deal with the mess even tho she was kinda at fault. y won't she trust him? =( looking forward to the updates ^-^
7/4/2008 c9 macey
u should update
u should update
4/22/2008 c9
3SkateForLife
Oh yay! I like this story a lot so far...can't wait for more interaction between Jay and Lydia!

Oh yay! I like this story a lot so far...can't wait for more interaction between Jay and Lydia!
3/14/2008 c9
8Ayra Amer
this is a great and interesting story around every turn theres something crazy going on. UPDATE SOON!

this is a great and interesting story around every turn theres something crazy going on. UPDATE SOON!
3/14/2008 c3 kirarin242
wow he got her there lol he went to the police before her that is stupid for them to belive that tho lol
wow he got her there lol he went to the police before her that is stupid for them to belive that tho lol
2/17/2008 c9 chocolatechipash
i love itt! i just wish there would be more action between lyd and jay anyway is there going to be a school scene or ..? coz it would be great if there was another guy =D anyway update soon.. hopefully your not too busy.
i love itt! i just wish there would be more action between lyd and jay anyway is there going to be a school scene or ..? coz it would be great if there was another guy =D anyway update soon.. hopefully your not too busy.
2/13/2008 c9
3readingismything
hey...the plot of this story is pretty nice and i can see it becoming more interesting...i wonder has Jay been really robbing or not?...hope u will update soon!

hey...the plot of this story is pretty nice and i can see it becoming more interesting...i wonder has Jay been really robbing or not?...hope u will update soon!