for You say coincidence, I say bad luck3/8/2010 c15 
4lost-pfreak23
I'm super impressed that you are continuing with this story. It's lovely, nice and light-hearted, and a delight to read!
4lost-pfreak23I'm super impressed that you are continuing with this story. It's lovely, nice and light-hearted, and a delight to read!
1/24/2010 c15 3to fall or to jump
I cant decide whether to like or not hate her dad's fiance... She seems sort of fake. And Lydia doesn't like her too much. At least she has Jay to brighten up her day!
3to fall or to jumpI cant decide whether to like or not hate her dad's fiance... She seems sort of fake. And Lydia doesn't like her too much. At least she has Jay to brighten up her day!
1/24/2010 c15 10dimethylmercury
Haven't read this since... what... chapter 9? Still leaves me squealing. HAHA.
There are some typos, but generally, the chapters are good. All the 'action' distracts me from them.(:
Can't wait for the next (and all the future) chapters! PLEASE update soon!:D (Well, school, life, etc comes first, of course!)
10dimethylmercuryHaven't read this since... what... chapter 9? Still leaves me squealing. HAHA.
There are some typos, but generally, the chapters are good. All the 'action' distracts me from them.(:
Can't wait for the next (and all the future) chapters! PLEASE update soon!:D (Well, school, life, etc comes first, of course!)
1/23/2010 c15 6LiME-GREEN-CAPES
i really like this! i think it's a very interesting and original plot and jay and lydia are just so cute together. :) update soon please!
6LiME-GREEN-CAPESi really like this! i think it's a very interesting and original plot and jay and lydia are just so cute together. :) update soon please!
1/23/2010 c15 3dontneedyou
I love Jay.
He's just adorable.
I'm hoping to see more of him in the next chapter. :)
And also, if I were Lydia, I would react the same way, I would hate Olivia. Haha.
Anyway, great chapter you have written here.
I'm looking forward to the next.
Wanna update sooner? :)
-dontneedyou
3dontneedyouI love Jay.
He's just adorable.
I'm hoping to see more of him in the next chapter. :)
And also, if I were Lydia, I would react the same way, I would hate Olivia. Haha.
Anyway, great chapter you have written here.
I'm looking forward to the next.
Wanna update sooner? :)
-dontneedyou
1/20/2010 c1 1butterflywishes
Interesting way to start a story...lol :] It may not be realistic but it made me laugh a lot! Haha sexy vase polisher, that was cute! Can't wait to read your whole story after my nap! :)
1butterflywishesInteresting way to start a story...lol :] It may not be realistic but it made me laugh a lot! Haha sexy vase polisher, that was cute! Can't wait to read your whole story after my nap! :)
1/17/2010 c14 kitasky123 to lazy to log in
this was really good... what will they do now? how long will they stay please update asap
this was really good... what will they do now? how long will they stay please update asap
1/16/2010 c14 3to fall or to jump
LOL! I loved when she slammed the door in thier face! And the whole awkward situation after! Where is her mother going while her father is there again?
3to fall or to jumpLOL! I loved when she slammed the door in thier face! And the whole awkward situation after! Where is her mother going while her father is there again?